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Indah's 10th birthday.

Our granddaughter

32 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
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So beautiful and treasured like our Sophia. Happy Birthday to Indah and abundant blessings to you all. Sending you my best today as well, dear Roy,
Sal XOs...

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Sally, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Ben Colder
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You know how to melt an old man's heart. Seeing and reading this places a smile on my face as I think of my grandchildren. My blessings to all. Thanks, Bro.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Ben, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Congratulations to Indah on her birthday and for her great achievement in her contest too. Your words are from the heart Roy as you admire your granddaughter, a beautiful poem as a tribute to her here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Dolly, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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Congratulations to Indah, as well as a very happy birthday! She looks very sweet, and I am sure she is very very special to you, much treasured. A lovely poem for her birthday, and may she be blessed indeed.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Wendy, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
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Happy Birthday, Lovely Indah! There's so much joy in her face - she radiates the Lord's light and joy. And I believe you that she's gifted as a dancer and is so graceful! Hope you all enjoyed celebrating together!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Helen, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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What a beautiful poem about your talented and beautiful grand daughter. She gets many trophies already at this age. I think she has a great future.
You should love her very much and I can tell from the following line of poetry:
The reason raindrops capture light,
or like the swan's exquisite flight.
Displaying beauty of the rose,
composing grace in tranquil pose.

An exceptionally loving poetry.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Lisa, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Roy,
Your birthday wish for your granddaughter is beautiful.
I'm sure she will love it especially its from her grandfather
Gert

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Gert, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from T B Botts
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Well Roy, I can see that you're very proud of your granddaughter and you're understandably biased. There were several phrases that stood out to me-You bring time's treasure with the dew, and light the sunshine Eden knew
You're the reason raindrops capture light, or like the swan's exquisite flight
How beautiful the words you've written. Well done! I hope you keep a scrap book or some record of your poems for your family. They'll be treasured for years to come.
Have a blessed evening (or morning in Australia?)
Tom

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Tom, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Artasylum
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The joy and love that is in this poem... I can feel that the writers heart is soaring and thanking God for the gift of this very special child... this is wonderful.. yours, diana

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Rachel L
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This is heartwarming, you're words are so kind and I can feel the love that inspired them.
I was very close to my grandfather, he helped raise me growing up and even though he couldn't express his feelings the way you can so beautifully I can feel him in them too.
Thank you

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Rachel, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy