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Indah's 10th birthday.

Our granddaughter

32 total reviews 
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Wow, Roy...your granddaughter is gorgeous and your poem is so touching and written with such great talent. Love your alliteration, rhyme and metaphors.

Thanks so much for sharing,

AnnaLinda

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for your most encouraging comments, I feel most elated at your kindness, AnnaLinda, blessings Roy.
Comment from Senyai
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Hi Roy,

Ahh, your little granddaughter is a bright and beautiful little sprite! Loving her gorgeous name to accompany her birthday greetings on this day. October 22.
Indah, how original. Just rolls off the tongue sweetly.

You are a protective Grandpa and rightly so as she is the embodiment of innocence and beauty. Happy Birthday, Indah :))

Always,
Senyai

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Senyai, for these great comments and.excellent review, blessings Roy
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
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A special name for a special person. I like the name, Indah which I think is very rare. However, I am from India and that sounds more beautiful to my ears. I think you have a reason for naming this special lady such a beautiful name and a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing, Kit

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Kit, for these great comments and.excellent review, blessings Roy
reply by Kit Nongkhlaw on 23-Oct-2021
    You are welcome, Kit.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Indah's 10th birthday.
by royowen

Aw... Roy, you have such beautiful granddaughter and your poem is the perfect gift. She must feel very special and loved. The presentation is lovely. Your author notes mentions additional pictures but I only see one.

Well done!

Happy birthday, Indah!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    I changed the photo Gypsy, I came upon that one, she is so special, thanks for-the beautifully review and comments, blessings Roy
Comment from Yardier
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Six Stars for your wonderful word painting of God's handiwork in the gift of linage. How were you to know that miles down life's road after your vows, you would be blessed with a smile and sparkling eyes of a ten year old?
Wonderful respect, Yardier.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    They are all an incredible and immeasurable blessing my friend, thanks for these wonderful comments, review and stars, you kind, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Oh, those eyes--so lovely. Your poem is excellent--skillfully written and charming in its vivid descriptions. I like the way the poem flows from all she means to you to what she means to the Lord.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Janice, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Roy, Oh how cute is your Indah and it is special to write for their 10th birthday ( I did for my four and they loved their special 10th poem as I am sure Indah will too). Gorgeous words, by a lovely Pa. I am sure you will celebrate this occasion with all the fanfare turning 10 brings Happy Birthday sweet Indah Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much dear Chris, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from aryr
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY WISHES TO 10 YEAR OLD INDAH. ð???ð???ð??ºð??¼ð??»ð???ð??? This was so special, Roy, I can truly understand why she is so wonderful. You did great with your praise and God's wonderful creation. Blessings.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
reply by aryr on 21-Oct-2021
    Most welcome, Roy, blessings.
Comment from Judy Lawless
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Oh, my goodness, she is precious, Roy! I can tell just by the picture that she's everything you say she is in this lovely poem. Those eyes could capture anyone's heart. Happy Birthday, dear Indah.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Judy, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Roy, what a gorgious little girl - Indah. Is she as lovely now at ten as she was at one. I'm sure she is - with those eyes!! A gorgeous granddaughter and a worthy dedication in this lovely poem of yours. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Dorothy, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy