Joe, You Played The Game
He did not win fair and square.20 total reviews
Comment from Justin Chopin
A very brave piece of poetry. I'm very impressed with your ability to articulate Biden's corruption with just three lines of verses. Great work with this poem .
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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A very brave piece of poetry. I'm very impressed with your ability to articulate Biden's corruption with just three lines of verses. Great work with this poem .
Comment Written 19-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
Interesting and clever entry for the contest. Both contestants seemed to have weaknesses, but the responsibility for a nation depends on many factors and the blame is never on just one person. Best wishes in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Interesting and clever entry for the contest. Both contestants seemed to have weaknesses, but the responsibility for a nation depends on many factors and the blame is never on just one person. Best wishes in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Joe, you played the Game' , is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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'Joe, you played the Game' , is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
You're very welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. I like the image, the end rhymes, and the overall presentation.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. I like the image, the end rhymes, and the overall presentation.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I doubt this guy will take the blame, he is too slippery for that and will wriggle out of it, but he deserves to hang his head in shame, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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I doubt this guy will take the blame, he is too slippery for that and will wriggle out of it, but he deserves to hang his head in shame, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from T B Botts
He played the game but if you expect him to hang his head in shame, I think you're going to have a long wait. He's a career politician; they've turned lying into a sport in Washington D.C. I'm not sure if he's even aware of how so many people feel about him. Nice job on your senryu.
Blessings
Tom
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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He played the game but if you expect him to hang his head in shame, I think you're going to have a long wait. He's a career politician; they've turned lying into a sport in Washington D.C. I'm not sure if he's even aware of how so many people feel about him. Nice job on your senryu.
Blessings
Tom
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
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Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I like your political senryu very much for it created thoughts in my head I dare not repeat. Joe will never shoulder the blame for his ego is too whopping big. He is destroying our nation at every turn. He is a blundering idiot and a fool. Did I say I love your poem? Oh, I do.
Great job!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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I like your political senryu very much for it created thoughts in my head I dare not repeat. Joe will never shoulder the blame for his ego is too whopping big. He is destroying our nation at every turn. He is a blundering idiot and a fool. Did I say I love your poem? Oh, I do.
Great job!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for the outspoken truth. This is no conspiracy theory. Coup complete with Biden in the Oval Office seat. His character, action, threats, and mandates, stinketh to high heaven. As Commander-in-Chief, he has proven himself to be a complete disaster. Poor us!
I apologize for no six today.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XO
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the outspoken truth. This is no conspiracy theory. Coup complete with Biden in the Oval Office seat. His character, action, threats, and mandates, stinketh to high heaven. As Commander-in-Chief, he has proven himself to be a complete disaster. Poor us!
I apologize for no six today.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XO
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Political Senryu writing prompt entry speaks the poet does not like Joe Biden because the election was rigged, he should not have won; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. October, Festive, Flood Fearing, Watery Month Here! ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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This Political Senryu writing prompt entry speaks the poet does not like Joe Biden because the election was rigged, he should not have won; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. October, Festive, Flood Fearing, Watery Month Here! ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from lancellot
Okay, speaking objectively, you have the all the required elements. Your syllable counts are spot on and this is indeed a political statement. It however doesn't seem poetic or humorous, though I admit those are subject concepts.
I would look at it again.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Okay, speaking objectively, you have the all the required elements. Your syllable counts are spot on and this is indeed a political statement. It however doesn't seem poetic or humorous, though I admit those are subject concepts.
I would look at it again.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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How should I change it?
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If it feels like a Senryu to you. Then it's fine. As long as you feel your thoughts come through.
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I would like to make it funny.
