We Can't Win
From dim to dumb...9 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I'm sorry I missed this! My sentiments exactly. Oh my, we are in big trouble. Congratulations I'm your second place award. Stellar!!
Sending you my best, dear Sharon.
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021
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I'm sorry I missed this! My sentiments exactly. Oh my, we are in big trouble. Congratulations I'm your second place award. Stellar!!
Sending you my best, dear Sharon.
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 22-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021
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Thank you, I'm so glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and true senryu you have penned for the writing prompt. It was fun to read and review. Thank you for always sharing with us. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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This is a very well written and true senryu you have penned for the writing prompt. It was fun to read and review. Thank you for always sharing with us. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it means so much to me. :)
Comment from Cat Merto
Nicely worded poem About politics
It's sad but true
promises turn into lies
And harder we as Americans fall
Nice photo and color theme Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Nicely worded poem About politics
It's sad but true
promises turn into lies
And harder we as Americans fall
Nice photo and color theme Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thanks for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
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Your welcome
Comment from l.raven
Amen you, and I so agree with you...where my problem is...
how can even a hand full of people who can see how evil
biden and he communist party are....stand by them?....
I understand some have been brainwashed listening to the
media...but it doesn't take a brain scientist to see they
censer everything spoken...even youtube admits it...if confronted...they remove you off youtube...
just look at the violence they interduce to our country...
all the death that is on their hands...and they could care less...it's money and control that they want...
but listen my sweet friend...there is one more who is powerful than them ...and God has the last word...I will not forsake thy...
in Chronicles 20:15..
Thus say the Lord to you...
Do Not be afraid, and do not be
dismayed at this great horde,
for the battle is not yours but God's
I'm sure He wants us to stand up and fight
for what He has given us...but truly believe
in my heart He is right there fighting for us...
is this the beginning of the end...only God knows...
but I think He put President Trump where He did for
a reason...I think He did it to wake people up to the
evil that was coming...and that's what's going on now...
it may get worse before it gets better....but just stay in prayer...and have faith...I believe it will get better...
millions are now waking up to what they never would've if President Trump hadn't shown/told them...
this is not something that started the day they stole the election...this was years in the making...even before JFK was president...why he was killed...he was going to expose them...
just prepare for what these evil ones are going to try and do...stock up...and know sweet girl there are people fighting now for their freedom...all over the world...we (USA) need to do the same thing here... and trust God knows what He's doing...it's going to happen at His will...His time...but I truly believe ...the best is yet to come...so sleep easy...one day at a time...President Trump never conceded from being president for a reason...he just stepped back to let those fools hang themselves...and their doing a great job at it...like people all over the world...and the USA...millions and millions and millions love President Trump...he is so missed...
I love your poem...Thank You for sharing...and your picture...EEEEEEKKKKKKKK...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Amen you, and I so agree with you...where my problem is...
how can even a hand full of people who can see how evil
biden and he communist party are....stand by them?....
I understand some have been brainwashed listening to the
media...but it doesn't take a brain scientist to see they
censer everything spoken...even youtube admits it...if confronted...they remove you off youtube...
just look at the violence they interduce to our country...
all the death that is on their hands...and they could care less...it's money and control that they want...
but listen my sweet friend...there is one more who is powerful than them ...and God has the last word...I will not forsake thy...
in Chronicles 20:15..
Thus say the Lord to you...
Do Not be afraid, and do not be
dismayed at this great horde,
for the battle is not yours but God's
I'm sure He wants us to stand up and fight
for what He has given us...but truly believe
in my heart He is right there fighting for us...
is this the beginning of the end...only God knows...
but I think He put President Trump where He did for
a reason...I think He did it to wake people up to the
evil that was coming...and that's what's going on now...
it may get worse before it gets better....but just stay in prayer...and have faith...I believe it will get better...
millions are now waking up to what they never would've if President Trump hadn't shown/told them...
this is not something that started the day they stole the election...this was years in the making...even before JFK was president...why he was killed...he was going to expose them...
just prepare for what these evil ones are going to try and do...stock up...and know sweet girl there are people fighting now for their freedom...all over the world...we (USA) need to do the same thing here... and trust God knows what He's doing...it's going to happen at His will...His time...but I truly believe ...the best is yet to come...so sleep easy...one day at a time...President Trump never conceded from being president for a reason...he just stepped back to let those fools hang themselves...and their doing a great job at it...like people all over the world...and the USA...millions and millions and millions love President Trump...he is so missed...
I love your poem...Thank You for sharing...and your picture...EEEEEEKKKKKKKK...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this exceptional review and for agreeing with my point of view. I too believe that God will see us through this, but we also have to fight this by seeing to it that elections are done fairly and that our vote counts. You are a true American who cares about our country....thank you. :)
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we just have to fight back...that's important...there are more of us than them...
their protesting like crazy all over the world...USA needs to pick it up...
we can do this...I love our country...as billions do...God Bless...and you are so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Paul McFarland
Truer words were never spoken. I hope we can survive this administration. But I couldn't believe that we elected them in the first place. And when I look around, from what I see, we'll probably vote in these left wing liberals again next time around.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Truer words were never spoken. I hope we can survive this administration. But I couldn't believe that we elected them in the first place. And when I look around, from what I see, we'll probably vote in these left wing liberals again next time around.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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I think that may be true and it scares me! Thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Strong views you have expressed here. Although I do not agree with everything you say I'll defend with my life your right to say it! Lol. Seriously though, great job!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Strong views you have expressed here. Although I do not agree with everything you say I'll defend with my life your right to say it! Lol. Seriously though, great job!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for this great review...it means a lot. :)
Comment from T B Botts
I share your sentiments. It's scary to think that the leader of the free world is either so incompetent or evil that we can get into the shape in which we find ourselves in such a short period of time. What's worse is that there are representatives who are supposed to provide a balance to the executive branch and apparently they have sold their souls as well. God help this country. I know bitching won't get the job done, but prayer will. They can't put a mask on that.
Blessings
Tom
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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I share your sentiments. It's scary to think that the leader of the free world is either so incompetent or evil that we can get into the shape in which we find ourselves in such a short period of time. What's worse is that there are representatives who are supposed to provide a balance to the executive branch and apparently they have sold their souls as well. God help this country. I know bitching won't get the job done, but prayer will. They can't put a mask on that.
Blessings
Tom
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for agreeing with me and for this great review. I'm worried where this country is heading, so much so that it keeps me up at night. Thanks again for reading.
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
This is good short and sweet right to the point thank you for sharing this should do very well I love the picture as well have a blessed day stay focused and stay creative
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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This is good short and sweet right to the point thank you for sharing this should do very well I love the picture as well have a blessed day stay focused and stay creative
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for reading, I wonder if you have any suggestions for improvement since you gave me 4 stars. I would appreciate it.
Comment from RodG
Your political ideas are clearly expressed in this Senyru . I don't agree with anything you are saying, but I am rating you on how well you conveyed your thoughts. Rod
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Your political ideas are clearly expressed in this Senyru . I don't agree with anything you are saying, but I am rating you on how well you conveyed your thoughts. Rod
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you, I do appreciate that. We'll just agree to disagree. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. :)
