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Rise from the Fall

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From one life to another

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This rewrite Chapter 4 of War and History Fiction speaks simply, casually about loving gift for Colton, an auxiliary soldier, receives a gift from his sister, love and remembrance, help all the way; nice ly plotted, fostered by dialogues interestingly realistic; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. October, Festive, Flood Fearing, Watery Month Here! ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thank you.
Comment from Eunice Amero
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I liked it. There was a couple of mistakes I noticed but that doesn't matter. "Don't (say should be stay) up too late, I'm sure we've met, but (were should be where)? You did a great job and sometimes a woman can get carried away when they see a man they like. There are times we forget things we should remember but that doesn't make us an idiot. Have a good day.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed reading my work.
reply by Eunice Amero on 16-Oct-2021
    You are more than welcome.