Quick Change Artist
Cascade poem for potlatch club5 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely Autumn Cascade poem Joan, and I love the rainbow leaves description. You really give us a sense of the change in temperature with the spicy cocoa in front of the fire, sounds delightful. Nicely told,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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This is a lovely Autumn Cascade poem Joan, and I love the rainbow leaves description. You really give us a sense of the change in temperature with the spicy cocoa in front of the fire, sounds delightful. Nicely told,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 21-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Valda, for reading and reviewing my poem. I appreciate all the stars.
Joan
Comment from juliaSjames
I really admire the way you tackle these poetic forms, Joan. Excellent topical theme. So true that the end of the year is fast approaching. And that makes me want to appreciate every day of autumn.
Thanks for sharing
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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I really admire the way you tackle these poetic forms, Joan. Excellent topical theme. So true that the end of the year is fast approaching. And that makes me want to appreciate every day of autumn.
Thanks for sharing
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem, Julia. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Joan
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you painted the autumn season with your lovely cascade poem, Joan! I especially liked the "rainbow leaves" and how you sparked all our senses of sight (colors), feeling (temperatures), hearing (birds' serenades), smell (allspice, sage) and taste (cocoa)!!
To the ground crops cow-tow (kowtow)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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I like how you painted the autumn season with your lovely cascade poem, Joan! I especially liked the "rainbow leaves" and how you sparked all our senses of sight (colors), feeling (temperatures), hearing (birds' serenades), smell (allspice, sage) and taste (cocoa)!!
To the ground crops cow-tow (kowtow)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Helen
Thanks for the thorough review. I am glad you noticed the use of the senses. I will make the correction.
Joan
Comment from dellsworthpoet
This poetic form is becoming familiar now. Sometimes the club entries are great fun. This one is.
A good subject for this style. The lines cascading adds to the feel of leaves falling. The pace is good. The images are strong. The flow is pleasant. The tone is conversational and warm.
Thanks for sharing. A good read.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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This poetic form is becoming familiar now. Sometimes the club entries are great fun. This one is.
A good subject for this style. The lines cascading adds to the feel of leaves falling. The pace is good. The images are strong. The flow is pleasant. The tone is conversational and warm.
Thanks for sharing. A good read.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the thorough review and encouraging comments
Joan
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sally Law
What a beautiful form and of course, subject matter. I have no Autumn folage here to boast. It is stored in my memory. I must travel to see it or view it in old photos.
Sending you my best today as always and best regards for the writing challenge,
Sally XOs
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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What a beautiful form and of course, subject matter. I have no Autumn folage here to boast. It is stored in my memory. I must travel to see it or view it in old photos.
Sending you my best today as always and best regards for the writing challenge,
Sally XOs
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your continued support and all the stars.
Have a great weekend
Joan
