To Compete
I feel like a winner in competitions.7 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed your poem. It is thought-provoking and relatable. Your rhyming and meter were well thought out. The structure was flexible and the words flowed freely. Your offered an insightful glimpse inside the world of competition. Wonderful job!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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I really enjoyed your poem. It is thought-provoking and relatable. Your rhyming and meter were well thought out. The structure was flexible and the words flowed freely. Your offered an insightful glimpse inside the world of competition. Wonderful job!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Karen Estep
A great way to express your views on competition! I liked your graphic and your honesty on how competition gives you self confidence! Keep writing, my friend! Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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A great way to express your views on competition! I liked your graphic and your honesty on how competition gives you self confidence! Keep writing, my friend! Good luck!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from karenina
The positive side of competition is this! To make our best effort and anticipate we may be recognized for it. That's healthy... I always fall back on the theory that the person I most need to "best"--is myself.
If I strive yo improve with each effort, I always feel a bit of success!
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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The positive side of competition is this! To make our best effort and anticipate we may be recognized for it. That's healthy... I always fall back on the theory that the person I most need to "best"--is myself.
If I strive yo improve with each effort, I always feel a bit of success!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thank you!
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You bet!
Karenina
Comment from Terry Broxson
Your analysis of competition is interesting, and you make some really good points on how competition helps you in life...no participation trophies for you, and that's a good thing. Good luck in the contest. I think in the last line of the 3rd verse you to say "than" instead of "then". Good Job.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Your analysis of competition is interesting, and you make some really good points on how competition helps you in life...no participation trophies for you, and that's a good thing. Good luck in the contest. I think in the last line of the 3rd verse you to say "than" instead of "then". Good Job.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you! I did what you suggested. Thank you for your help!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. There's good flow and good details. It's easy for readers to see that you enjoy competition. For some people, they thrive on it, and others take it too far. This sounds like you have it under control.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. There's good flow and good details. It's easy for readers to see that you enjoy competition. For some people, they thrive on it, and others take it too far. This sounds like you have it under control.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Sally Law
As Wayne Gretzky said: You miss 100% of the shots you don't take.
You never know unless you try. I always surprise myself and I celebrate every piece I write, win or lose.
Sending you my best today as always, and best regards for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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As Wayne Gretzky said: You miss 100% of the shots you don't take.
You never know unless you try. I always surprise myself and I celebrate every piece I write, win or lose.
Sending you my best today as always, and best regards for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse on competition, To Compete, opens up the wonderful world of vying to be number one. The thrill of being recognized is like a shot in the arm of adrenaline.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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This free verse on competition, To Compete, opens up the wonderful world of vying to be number one. The thrill of being recognized is like a shot in the arm of adrenaline.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you!
