Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 120 "A No Rules Muse "Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from kiwisteveh
I chuckled that in a contest with no rules where you wrote about that very topic you chose to give yourself the very strict rule of a monorhymed form, in strict quatrains of even length lines.
I had some difficulty working out whether you were for or against the 'no rules' poetry, but I did appreciate the imaginative and concise expression which was lively and energetic.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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I chuckled that in a contest with no rules where you wrote about that very topic you chose to give yourself the very strict rule of a monorhymed form, in strict quatrains of even length lines.
I had some difficulty working out whether you were for or against the 'no rules' poetry, but I did appreciate the imaginative and concise expression which was lively and energetic.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the Review and Continued Support
Comment from Terry Broxson
Interesting. I love the way it flows, and like the way it rhymes. When I read it aloud, I like the way it sounds. I would like to suggest something to improve, I don't think I can. I do wonder about the question marks, do they change what you want to say, I am not sure, You are the author, I defer to your judgement. Good Job.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Interesting. I love the way it flows, and like the way it rhymes. When I read it aloud, I like the way it sounds. I would like to suggest something to improve, I don't think I can. I do wonder about the question marks, do they change what you want to say, I am not sure, You are the author, I defer to your judgement. Good Job.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the Review and Support