Wheat corn and pumpkin
Haiku18 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Elegant--vividly evocative of autumn harvest. Imagery of empty fields is an apt wrap-up. Effective contrast from the bounty to the fields divested thereof.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Elegant--vividly evocative of autumn harvest. Imagery of empty fields is an apt wrap-up. Effective contrast from the bounty to the fields divested thereof.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I studied this poem for a while wondering what 'wheat corn' was. Finally it hit me, you meant wheat, corn, and pumpkins. You'd left off the commas. Perfect example as to why commas are important.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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I studied this poem for a while wondering what 'wheat corn' was. Finally it hit me, you meant wheat, corn, and pumpkins. You'd left off the commas. Perfect example as to why commas are important.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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haikus should not have any punctuations,.I know it looks odd. I would check again with the club if I could put a comma.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Sanku, a well written 5/7/5 in perfect form. Well worded, though your third line puzzled me - could be a satori maybe? Great picture and an overall good Club entry - warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Hello Sanku, a well written 5/7/5 in perfect form. Well worded, though your third line puzzled me - could be a satori maybe? Great picture and an overall good Club entry - warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Yes it is intended to be a satori .a contrast yo the plentiness
Hint of next sowing etc etc
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a lovely haiku about celebrating autumn harvest and perhaps preparing the fields for the coming planting season. The picture is nice accompaniment. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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This is a lovely haiku about celebrating autumn harvest and perhaps preparing the fields for the coming planting season. The picture is nice accompaniment. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good haiku
with effective imagery
of the fall harvest of
"wheat corn and pumpkins."
-A good satori line, too.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good haiku
with effective imagery
of the fall harvest of
"wheat corn and pumpkins."
-A good satori line, too.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely poem, with a rustic feel as well as a celebratory joyful tone, with the blessing of a good harvest. A good contrast between the bountiful produce and the emptiness of the fields in the third line. Well done. I like it a lot.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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A lovely poem, with a rustic feel as well as a celebratory joyful tone, with the blessing of a good harvest. A good contrast between the bountiful produce and the emptiness of the fields in the third line. Well done. I like it a lot.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Haiku speaks a scene of autumnal joy at the wheat and pumpkin harvest and the empty fields wait for; well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review this; God Bless you, my dear good writer, wish read more. ALCREATOR, October, Festive Month...
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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This Haiku speaks a scene of autumnal joy at the wheat and pumpkin harvest and the empty fields wait for; well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review this; God Bless you, my dear good writer, wish read more. ALCREATOR, October, Festive Month...
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
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Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a very nice Haiku, with two perfectly interconnected lines of concrete imagery and a great satori in line 3. Your artwork is stunning.
Loved the presentation and visuals. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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This is a very nice Haiku, with two perfectly interconnected lines of concrete imagery and a great satori in line 3. Your artwork is stunning.
Loved the presentation and visuals. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much
