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Dawning sun

A ballad

33 total reviews 
Comment from Irish Rain
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Oh, so pretty!
I'm just the opposite, I love to see His
handiwork in the stars at night, 'neath a
midnight moon.
I think it's been years since I've seen a sunrise,
and I'm sure it wasn't on purpose, ha ha.
Love this!!!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Judy, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Irish Rain on 16-Oct-2021
    You're welcome!!
Comment from BethShelby
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Ballads are my favorite form of poetry. They are simple but they seem to flow so naturally. Heaven had created in nature a form of praise that even the birds and animals and trees seem to understand.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Beth, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your poem is lovely and excellent in every respect--skillfully written with great rhyming and meter and vivid descriptions of the glories of dawn.
Expressive blend of literal and figurative language.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Janice, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Oh, is there no end to your talent? No, there is not...just when I think I have read every type of verse you can pen - you up and surprise me once again. This is just so lovely and makes me feel like singing. Thank you for this awesome verse.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Sherry, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by Sherry Asbury on 16-Oct-2021
    You never fail to please!!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Bless you
Comment from Janetsue
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They praise the source of mercy...this is my favorite line here. It is truly a wondrous thing to have a loving God watch over us. He is due the best we have to give. You cited the perfect verse with Lamentations 3:22-23. Blessings, my friend!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Janet, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
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Roy,
This is a good mixture of artwork and words. I like the smoothness of poem as we move from night to day. I like the personification and metaphors used to describe birds and wind.
Keep writng and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Joan, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
reply by dragonpoet on 16-Oct-2021
    You are most kindly welcome, Roy.
    Have a great weeked.
    Joan
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A serene heavenly write filled with nature's sweet sunrises and melodies of nature, an ambient and warm ballad poem Roy and a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Dolly, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from juliaSjames
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This poem overflows with joy. God's creation greets the new day with unabashed praise. I feel uplifted and inspired to revel in the opportunities and the challenges of new beginnings. Thanks for sharing.

Stay safe

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Julia, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
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Loved your praise poem, Roy! In the observation of the earthly sunrise, your spiritual eyes saw the Heavenly scene of all creation in Heaven and Earth giving praise to the Lord!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Helen, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Anne Johnston
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A beautiful poem about the morning, and God's faithfulness to us. I love that passage from Lamentations, that God's mercies are new every morning. So glad I know Him.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Anne for these generous comments and great review, blessings Roy
reply by Anne Johnston on 16-Oct-2021
    You are welcome