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Dawning sun

A ballad

33 total reviews 
Comment from Senyai
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Hi Roy,

I love this absolutely beautiful poem you have penned! I have never read such stunning lines of the dawning of the day. So lyrical and perfect an ode to the sun of morning that truly speaks to the Son of God and this Life he gave as His Gift to us.

Simply put... this nurtured me as I partook these lines written from your loving and mighty heart, Roy. Thank you.

If I had a six, it would be yours!

Always,
Senyai

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks Senyai, for these lovely comments and.review, blessings Roy
reply by Senyai on 23-Oct-2021
    Hi Roy, a beautiful poem, Roy. Have a wonderful Saturday ❤️
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    You too
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
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Wonderful amazing poem. You glorify God through this great poem. Moreover, you quoted from Lamentations of the great Prophet, Jeremaiah. This is one of my favorite verse. I had preached from this verse in one small devotion of the College I worked. Thanks for sharing, Kit.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks for these fantastic comments and.a lovely review, blessings Roy
reply by Kit Nongkhlaw on 23-Oct-2021
    The pleasure is mine, Kit
Comment from aryr
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I absolutely loved the picture, Roy, it showed the peaceful calmness of one's faith. I especially enjoy each sunrise but I also enjoy the sunset as well. Your words captured God's promise in return for your love and faithfulness. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
reply by aryr on 18-Oct-2021
    You are most welcome, Roy.
Comment from Deniz22
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You are so talented and your gift is wed to Christ producing messages to Glorify Him on the earth. Your work lifts my spirit, thank you brother!

Proverbs 25:25
"As cold waters to a thirsty soul, so is good news from a far country."

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Denis, for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Deniz22
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You are so talented and your gift is wed to Christ producing messages to Glorify Him on the earth. Your work lifts my spirit, thank you brother!

Proverbs 25:25
"As cold waters to a thirsty soul, so is good news from a far country."

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Bless you,
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Stunningly beautiful Roy in word and image of the dawn breaking.
It is so rich in imagery and in faith. I read it as a prayer as well as a ballad.
Thank you for the words.
Blessings
Mary

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Mary, for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
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Again, I love your faithfulness to God's word. Mornings are such a special time and a great reminder of his faithfulness.

Blessings my friend.
Janet

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Janet, for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is a beautiful poem about this glorious sunrise portrayed in the picture, Roy. I too love to see sunrises, but I have to admit I'm not up early enough to catch many. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Judy, for these terrific comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
reply by Judy Lawless on 17-Oct-2021
    Your welcome, Roy.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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A lovely presentation Roy of the dawning of a new day. Each morning, each dusk, is different, as we are all different.
I hear the hallowed laughter
as winds embrace the trees - love those lines Roy, in a great Saturday morning read. Have a lovely weekend,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Valda, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from MAMONIA
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What a beautiful environment you created with this poem. I can see, hear, and smell nature throughout this poem.
Only God can create such beauty as you proclaim, and every morning we need to be grateful for his majestic sun.
Thank you, again, for sharing your wisdom, your talent, and your love of God.
My best,
Marie

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Marie, for these delightful comments and a great review, blessings Roy