Makes Me Happy
A contest entry.2 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
I liked the list of things that makes you happy - doing house chores, reading astronomy, enjoying time with your nephews.
These stood out:
I live with pure joy,
I thank God for bringing me back
Living with joy is a gift. God has been very generous, there is so much beauty in the world.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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I liked the list of things that makes you happy - doing house chores, reading astronomy, enjoying time with your nephews.
These stood out:
I live with pure joy,
I thank God for bringing me back
Living with joy is a gift. God has been very generous, there is so much beauty in the world.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you have created a life here that makes you happy and this is a good example of someone taking from life all the good things.
This line may need some adjusting as it does not make sense:
I like sometimes watch shows comedy,
Perhaps:
"I sometimes watch shows with comedy"
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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It sounds like you have created a life here that makes you happy and this is a good example of someone taking from life all the good things.
This line may need some adjusting as it does not make sense:
I like sometimes watch shows comedy,
Perhaps:
"I sometimes watch shows with comedy"
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you! Thanks for your help! I fixed the mistake. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
