Watch Where You're Walking
Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I'm proud of myself because I got it without reading the author's notes beforehand. I think it's hilarious! Of course, it doesn't take much to amuse me these days. LOL Great job! I wish I had a sixth star to give you!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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I'm proud of myself because I got it without reading the author's notes beforehand. I think it's hilarious! Of course, it doesn't take much to amuse me these days. LOL Great job! I wish I had a sixth star to give you!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Lol. Yeah, some folks, I knew, just wouldn't get it. Haha. What can you do? I really appreciate the generous 6 offer and good luck wishes, Patty. Thank you. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have yourself a wonderful rest of your weekend.
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Writer723. I'm glad you found this piece thought provoking and intriguing and that the whole 17 syllables held your attention throughout the entire read.
Comment from LisaMay
Frank surely delivered a timely warning, although it could be construed as being unkindly spoken... saving the animal from landing ass-up in the well. I am thankful the delightful photo shows the donkey's face and not his personal ass-hole.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Frank surely delivered a timely warning, although it could be construed as being unkindly spoken... saving the animal from landing ass-up in the well. I am thankful the delightful photo shows the donkey's face and not his personal ass-hole.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Haha. Yeah, I had to leave his ass out of it. Good thing Frank saved him from the donkey hole. Lol. Thank you for the great review, Lisa. I created this silly pic myself from a couple different pictures.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, what a fun pun. I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. The picture plus your words pair perfectly. I like the way you formatted the lines.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Haha, what a fun pun. I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. The picture plus your words pair perfectly. I like the way you formatted the lines.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Jan. I actually created this silly pic myself from a couple different Google pictures. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, this is funny! I hope you win the contest, mystery poet. A delightful read that had me laughing my ass off. Pun intended. ;))
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Oh, this is funny! I hope you win the contest, mystery poet. A delightful read that had me laughing my ass off. Pun intended. ;))
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Sal. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have yourself a fantastic night.
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Thank you for the laughter. Best O Luck! :)
