Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

This is romantic and faithfulness can be romantic, too. I really like the following line:
Imagine that you're with me even when we're apart.

I think imagination is an unique for our humans.

Well done.

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Thanks

Comment from Frances Jean

Excellent

A well written Acrostic poem obeying the requirements of the form. You wrote with love in your heart portraying a depth of emotion. Unfortunately with most young couples these days marriages or simply partnerships are not enduring. They give up at the slightest glitch. All the best Franky

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Thank-you

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

Sigh** This is so sweet and beautiful. Your couple is fitting perfectly for your words. Your choice of words for an acrostic is so well-done that I didn't even notice till the notes! Best of luck in the contest.

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Thank you.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Your sweet poem certainly shows the ideal characteristics that make for a lasting relationship blessed by God. If only all matches could have these attributes of fidelity, faith, and gratitude. You have handled the constraints of writing an acrostic very well.

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Thank you.

Comment from SoulRiver

Average

I like the way the poem starts with 'Dear' it makes it seem intimate, like a private letter between husband and wife and lends itself to being the inner, private thoughts of the writer. I thought that the rhymes on each line distracted a little from the writing and might be better with every second line?

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

I think the poem is touching.

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

A nice entry for the - Romance poetry contest.
The content certainly describes the feelings of love and devotion
in this relationship. I like this line -
Our Father above is proud of good things we do.
It adds to the union made in heaven. Great picture too.
Well done and best of luck in the competition.

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Thanks very much.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I enjoyed this poem for the Romance contest but just felt the last line was a little weaker than the rest. Suggestion: " Let's make a daily goal to always please Him too", or something similar (same number of syllables). But it is your poem so feel free to ignore. Wishing you the best for your entry.
Wendy

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

The last line starts with n, not l. Thanks.

reply by Wendy G on 13-Oct-2021

I did realise that. Twelve syllables. Never mind.

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

ok

reply by Wendy G on 13-Oct-2021

Sorry. I just realised what you meant. It had to be acrostic as well. Silly me.

Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .

Excellent

Thank you for sharing I thought it was a real good romance poem your talented keep up the good work stay blessed and creative once again thank you for sharing this wonderful point

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You are welcome.

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You are welcome.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Devotion, what an excellent read and way of describing love, for someone to give their heart is something we all should cherish and honor, very well don and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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Thanks very much!