Devotion
How a husband and wife should be devoted to each other.39 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is truly beautiful, and it spells out DEVOTION, in its acrostic, and in its content, besides the wonderful way you've managed to get the lines to rhyme with each other. At first I didn't even realize the acrostic part! Your loving care for one another is so evident. And having God's love in there is so very important.
I love the photo, how the beautiful bouquet covers both the bride and the groom.
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This is truly beautiful, and it spells out DEVOTION, in its acrostic, and in its content, besides the wonderful way you've managed to get the lines to rhyme with each other. At first I didn't even realize the acrostic part! Your loving care for one another is so evident. And having God's love in there is so very important.
I love the photo, how the beautiful bouquet covers both the bride and the groom.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks!
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Thanks.
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You're very welcome. May God bless you. - Mary Kay
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God bless you.
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Thank you!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Your entry for this contest is well written. Devotion is very important in a marriage, and you have given some good advice for the success of a marriage. When both partners love God, loving each other will be easy.
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Your entry for this contest is well written. Devotion is very important in a marriage, and you have given some good advice for the success of a marriage. When both partners love God, loving each other will be easy.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your words.
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Thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Devotion
Excellent entry for the
Romance writing prompt contest. Your love poem sounds very spiritual and has a nice flow with very creative words. The presentation is lovely. Good luck in the contest.
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Devotion
Excellent entry for the
Romance writing prompt contest. Your love poem sounds very spiritual and has a nice flow with very creative words. The presentation is lovely. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Raul1
A very good romance poem. It is clear and concise. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
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A very good romance poem. It is clear and concise. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks!
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You're welcome!
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:)
Comment from rjuselius
Aaawwweee this is such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear anonymous! I love the language as it is polished and ethereal.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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Aaawwweee this is such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear anonymous! I love the language as it is polished and ethereal.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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Welcome
Comment from Hitcher
Yes... and it is those little things that we do that mean so much to each other. I like acrostic poems, they can be tricky to write and get right a lot read clunky and have no flow. Yours my friend is very smooth, well written and touches on the important things a forever love should be about. Very nice! Good luck!
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Yes... and it is those little things that we do that mean so much to each other. I like acrostic poems, they can be tricky to write and get right a lot read clunky and have no flow. Yours my friend is very smooth, well written and touches on the important things a forever love should be about. Very nice! Good luck!
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Thanks
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your romance writing prompt entry. This poem read smoothly and offers good advice. My question becomes, is it supposed to be acrostic? Under
' Writing Prompt' are acrostic guidelines.
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I enjoyed reading your romance writing prompt entry. This poem read smoothly and offers good advice. My question becomes, is it supposed to be acrostic? Under
' Writing Prompt' are acrostic guidelines.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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Yes it is acrostic
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DUH!!!! I messed up. You did a wonderful job. SORRY!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your picture plus well thought out words pair nicely. I like the use of rhyme, too. You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words/lines flow smoothly with great imagery.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your picture plus well thought out words pair nicely. I like the use of rhyme, too. You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words/lines flow smoothly with great imagery.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you. Do you know how to write a 575 poem on animals using a play on words?
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I entered this same contest years ago. I wrote about a real witty animal and it went nowhere in the booth. What seems to win is as you say a play on words. Maybe try skunk and incorporate something like don't get skunked--but then you would need to explain a bit in author notes. Maybe try duck as in duck for cover etc. It's kind of difficult since the rules are vague.
Comment from nomi338
Absent that element known and accepted as devotion, no relationship can last for very long. There are those out there in the world that are just waiting to prove that nothing good in the world is long lasting and worthy of believing in. We have the power to prove them wrong, by simply living up to our words of promise and devotion.
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Absent that element known and accepted as devotion, no relationship can last for very long. There are those out there in the world that are just waiting to prove that nothing good in the world is long lasting and worthy of believing in. We have the power to prove them wrong, by simply living up to our words of promise and devotion.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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I guess you love the poem?
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Oh yes.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Such a gorgeous picture; it sure shows the happiness between the husband and wife. When it comes to writing about romance, it is very sacred; when I wrote my novels, there were no bedroom scenes.
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Such a gorgeous picture; it sure shows the happiness between the husband and wife. When it comes to writing about romance, it is very sacred; when I wrote my novels, there were no bedroom scenes.
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