Devotion
How a husband and wife should be devoted to each other.39 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Dear lady, this is absolutely beautiful. Everything about it. Beautiful overall presentation, beautiful rhyme, beautiful expressions of what love and romance are. So glad you put God in the picture.
Wonderful poem!
Gale
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Dear lady, this is absolutely beautiful. Everything about it. Beautiful overall presentation, beautiful rhyme, beautiful expressions of what love and romance are. So glad you put God in the picture.
Wonderful poem!
Gale
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
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You are so very welcome, pookietoo :)
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:)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a very nice poem. One that sounds as if it should be inside an engagement or wedding card. Your picture is also lovely and inspires that thought.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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This is a very nice poem. One that sounds as if it should be inside an engagement or wedding card. Your picture is also lovely and inspires that thought.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
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Thanks.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a very sweet entry for the romance contest. It would be nice if every couple could share the love and friendship as in your poem. I enjoyed the rhythm and the rhyme and the picture goes perfectly with the poem. Good luck with the contest. You have my vote!
Patty
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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This is a very sweet entry for the romance contest. It would be nice if every couple could share the love and friendship as in your poem. I enjoyed the rhythm and the rhyme and the picture goes perfectly with the poem. Good luck with the contest. You have my vote!
Patty
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Welcome.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is such a beautiful love poem. I don't know who is cuter in the wedding picture - her or him (lol). He has such a sweet beautiful face, like a woman's. It is always a pleasure to look at wedding pictures - you view two happy people in love and it is contagious.
Excellent imagery, visuals, presentation, well sustained rhyme scheme and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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This is such a beautiful love poem. I don't know who is cuter in the wedding picture - her or him (lol). He has such a sweet beautiful face, like a woman's. It is always a pleasure to look at wedding pictures - you view two happy people in love and it is contagious.
Excellent imagery, visuals, presentation, well sustained rhyme scheme and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine, loving write and I enjoyed the sentiments here.
I just have one suggestion for this line for the sake of meter:
"Imagine that you're with me even when (we are) apart".
Much enjoyed,
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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A fine, loving write and I enjoyed the sentiments here.
I just have one suggestion for this line for the sake of meter:
"Imagine that you're with me even when (we are) apart".
Much enjoyed,
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Took that out so it would be twelve syllables.
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Okay, maybe this would work better as this is 10 syllables and it it in meter:
?Imagine you?re with me, when we?re apart.?
Love Dolly x
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12 syllables Imagine you're with me even when we're apart.
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Trouble is this line is out of meter:
ImAGine YOU?RE with ME EVen . . . . etc., I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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It is ok. It is heartfelt.
Comment from Livia Lynch
I love the belonging feeling I get from this poem, it feels nice to read.
It has a good flow, too. Wonderful job!
Hope you are having a good day :)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I love the belonging feeling I get from this poem, it feels nice to read.
It has a good flow, too. Wonderful job!
Hope you are having a good day :)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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You too
Comment from Janetsue
This is both romantic and a beautiful expression of what a marriage is supposed to be...loving devotion and mutual happiness. Best wishes in the Romance writing contest!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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This is both romantic and a beautiful expression of what a marriage is supposed to be...loving devotion and mutual happiness. Best wishes in the Romance writing contest!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thanks
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A very poignant post. A devoted couple is an indestructible force. When two independent, intelligent, and hard-working people come together, nothing can stop them from achieving their dreams and building an amazing life for themselves. Much enjoyed and love the pic too. Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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A very poignant post. A devoted couple is an indestructible force. When two independent, intelligent, and hard-working people come together, nothing can stop them from achieving their dreams and building an amazing life for themselves. Much enjoyed and love the pic too. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are lovely, loving, descriptive and creative. The poem flows and connects well. I love the last line - all that marriage is! The photo is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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The author's words are lovely, loving, descriptive and creative. The poem flows and connects well. I love the last line - all that marriage is! The photo is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from papa55mike
That requires a complete union that many couples never complete the process. What a wonderfully written poem. An acrostic that rhymes.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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That requires a complete union that many couples never complete the process. What a wonderfully written poem. An acrostic that rhymes.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thanks
