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Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Hi Helen, I didn't know of Portia's surgery! I'm sorry I missed this, until I contacted Portia myself, because I was concerned about her. I was wondering whether there was something amiss (other than the problems she normally deals with). Thank you for writing this beautiful poem for our beautiful friend and sister in Christ.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Hi Helen, I didn't know of Portia's surgery! I'm sorry I missed this, until I contacted Portia myself, because I was concerned about her. I was wondering whether there was something amiss (other than the problems she normally deals with). Thank you for writing this beautiful poem for our beautiful friend and sister in Christ.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Mary Kay! Her surgery on Friday went well. We're praying that the growth is not cancerous. Her cousin is helping her out this week. So thankful for good friends and relatives who come to help in times of need! Hugs!
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Yes, that sure is a blessing -- much as she is, herself! We'll continue to pray for healing and for good results. I'm so thankful for her, for you and for, as you said, all good friends from the Lord.
Blessings and love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Helen,
Years ago, when I was leading the Youth Choir at church, and always looking for new contemporary Christian music, I borrowed the music of Neil Young's song, "Heart of Gold". And I set the words of an old hymn to it, "I Need Jesus".
1. "I need Jesus, my need I now confess;
No friend like Him in times of deep distress;
I need Jesus, the need I gladly own;
Though some may bear their load alone,
Yet I need Jesus."
2 "I need Jesus, I need a friend like Him,
A friend to guide when paths of life are dim;
I need Jesus, when foes my soul assail;
Alone I know I can but fail,
So I need Jesus."
3. "I need Jesus, I need Him to the end;
No one like Him, He is the sinner's friend;
I need Jesus, no other friend will do;
So constant, kind, so strong and true,
Yes, I need Jesus."
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Of course, I changed a couple of words here and there. But it went over well with the congregation.
I admire you for holding so many Fanstorians up in prayer, and making us aware of those who need prayer. Every prayer is important, because "we wrestle not against flesh and blood, but against principalities, against powers, against the rulers of the darkness of this world, against spiritual wickedness in high places." Ephesians 6:12
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"In daily giving loving (care)
Her heart lifts more than most can bear
Converting troubles into prayer
Because she knows that our God (cares)"
A slight suggestion to avoid using "care" twice...
(In daily giving loving care
Her heart lifts more than most can bear
Converting troubles into prayer
Because she knows that God is there) ... "God is there" reminds me of a song by Dallas Holm, "He Is There". The song got me through some rough waters when I was younger. Perhaps I'll tell you about it sometime. Here's a link to the song:
https://youtu.be/U101nLQmZF0
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"She helps the others though she's ill
And though fatigued, she serves them still
While writing praises with His quill
Submits (with) faith to God's good will" ... (I suggest,
Submits her faith to God's good will)
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"So to our Lord I will appeal
That Portia He will fully heal
So she'll return with joyful zeal
And write of how God's love is real" ... it's when we are down in the valley that we come closest to God. Your last verse reminded me of a song I borrowed words from, and wrote my own music to. Nothing wrong with the original music, of course, but I wanted to make it more lively for the kids.
In The Valley He Restoreth My Soul"
https://youtu.be/dvi4nCC3GRc
How is pharp doing now? Do you know? Many of us take our good health for granted, don't we?
All the Best, Helen.
Blessings,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Hi Helen,
Years ago, when I was leading the Youth Choir at church, and always looking for new contemporary Christian music, I borrowed the music of Neil Young's song, "Heart of Gold". And I set the words of an old hymn to it, "I Need Jesus".
1. "I need Jesus, my need I now confess;
No friend like Him in times of deep distress;
I need Jesus, the need I gladly own;
Though some may bear their load alone,
Yet I need Jesus."
2 "I need Jesus, I need a friend like Him,
A friend to guide when paths of life are dim;
I need Jesus, when foes my soul assail;
Alone I know I can but fail,
So I need Jesus."
3. "I need Jesus, I need Him to the end;
No one like Him, He is the sinner's friend;
I need Jesus, no other friend will do;
So constant, kind, so strong and true,
Yes, I need Jesus."
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Of course, I changed a couple of words here and there. But it went over well with the congregation.
I admire you for holding so many Fanstorians up in prayer, and making us aware of those who need prayer. Every prayer is important, because "we wrestle not against flesh and blood, but against principalities, against powers, against the rulers of the darkness of this world, against spiritual wickedness in high places." Ephesians 6:12
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"In daily giving loving (care)
Her heart lifts more than most can bear
Converting troubles into prayer
Because she knows that our God (cares)"
A slight suggestion to avoid using "care" twice...
(In daily giving loving care
Her heart lifts more than most can bear
Converting troubles into prayer
Because she knows that God is there) ... "God is there" reminds me of a song by Dallas Holm, "He Is There". The song got me through some rough waters when I was younger. Perhaps I'll tell you about it sometime. Here's a link to the song:
https://youtu.be/U101nLQmZF0
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"She helps the others though she's ill
And though fatigued, she serves them still
While writing praises with His quill
Submits (with) faith to God's good will" ... (I suggest,
Submits her faith to God's good will)
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"So to our Lord I will appeal
That Portia He will fully heal
So she'll return with joyful zeal
And write of how God's love is real" ... it's when we are down in the valley that we come closest to God. Your last verse reminded me of a song I borrowed words from, and wrote my own music to. Nothing wrong with the original music, of course, but I wanted to make it more lively for the kids.
In The Valley He Restoreth My Soul"
https://youtu.be/dvi4nCC3GRc
How is pharp doing now? Do you know? Many of us take our good health for granted, don't we?
All the Best, Helen.
Blessings,
Kimbob
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Kimbob! You have a wealth of songs and praises at your fingertips and they all come to mind as you read other people's works. Thanks for your suggestions. This was just to get others to pray and the Lord has answered. She's back home and awaits test results by Monday. We pray that the growth is benign. She writes that God is Good!! Hugs and blessings!
Comment from juliaSjames
Healing energy and best wishes to Portia. And thank you for sharing this information in a beautiful flowing spiritual write.
I also appreciate your author notes.
In my experience creativity of any kind helps to attract positive energy which in turn helps caregivers carry out their onerous duties with a loving heart.
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Healing energy and best wishes to Portia. And thank you for sharing this information in a beautiful flowing spiritual write.
I also appreciate your author notes.
In my experience creativity of any kind helps to attract positive energy which in turn helps caregivers carry out their onerous duties with a loving heart.
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Julia! Of course, you would know as you have been a caregiver for a long time with so much love to share! Thank you! Hugs!
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Hugs back!
Comment from Judy Lawless
What a beautiful, caring poem, Helen. I don't know Portia, probably because I don't follow many poets, but I understand the strength that is needed to be a caregiver. Being ill herself makes it so much harder. I offer my prayers to her and all the writers on here who have their own crosses to bare.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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What a beautiful, caring poem, Helen. I don't know Portia, probably because I don't follow many poets, but I understand the strength that is needed to be a caregiver. Being ill herself makes it so much harder. I offer my prayers to her and all the writers on here who have their own crosses to bare.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Judy! Your prayers are so appreciated. So many hear have chronic illnesses or as you put it, "crosses to bear." Hugs!
Comment from Sanku
I have not read Pharp...I am wondering how many people are there whom I may never know..
Thank you very much for including all care givers...
My prayers will be for her for i understand what exactly what she is going through .Often I ignore my troubles because i can't afford to be sick.
Your mono rhymed stanzas have the tone of an intense prayer......
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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I have not read Pharp...I am wondering how many people are there whom I may never know..
Thank you very much for including all care givers...
My prayers will be for her for i understand what exactly what she is going through .Often I ignore my troubles because i can't afford to be sick.
Your mono rhymed stanzas have the tone of an intense prayer......
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thank you again, Santha! She's a wonderful poet of spiritual poems. She's very kind and was one who encouraged me in my first book here when I started.
Hugs!
Comment from Irish Rain
I did not know this.
I will certainly pray for her,
she is such a loving, giving person.
Her poetry is always so uplifting.
I pray God blesses her tomorrow, and in the days
to follow.
Beautiful poem Miss Helen,
blessings...
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I did not know this.
I will certainly pray for her,
she is such a loving, giving person.
Her poetry is always so uplifting.
I pray God blesses her tomorrow, and in the days
to follow.
Beautiful poem Miss Helen,
blessings...
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Miss Judy! Your prayers are SOOO appreciated! Hugs!
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You're welcome, I pray Portia does well!!
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Thank you, Miss Judy! 💖
Comment from LJbutterfly
This beautiful poem and prayer brought tears to my eyes and blessed me. I've read many of Portia's inspirational prayers, and I thank you for letting us know her status. I pray a special blessing over your life for your caring and motivational spirit.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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This beautiful poem and prayer brought tears to my eyes and blessed me. I've read many of Portia's inspirational prayers, and I thank you for letting us know her status. I pray a special blessing over your life for your caring and motivational spirit.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Lorraine! Appreciate your caring spirit and your kind prayers! Hugs!!
Comment from robyn corum
Helen,
How precious and kind! I had no idea about Portia's illness and issues - I'm so glad you are close to her and are aware enough to let us all know more. You are so good! Thank you!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Helen,
How precious and kind! I had no idea about Portia's illness and issues - I'm so glad you are close to her and are aware enough to let us all know more. You are so good! Thank you!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Robyn! I'm so happy we have so many praying for her now. Hugs!
Comment from AnnieDawn
I have always had a soft spot for the name Portia. Just have loved the name. I will add her to my prayer list and ask the church to add her to the prayer chain. It is so good of you to care enough to bring this to our attention. Thank you.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I have always had a soft spot for the name Portia. Just have loved the name. I will add her to my prayer list and ask the church to add her to the prayer chain. It is so good of you to care enough to bring this to our attention. Thank you.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your compassionate response, Annie! Like you, she is caring soul and you have been caring for so many in your life. Appreciate you! Hugs!
Comment from pharp
Dear Sweet Helen,
I shed tears while reading this beautiful, heartfelt, and very touching poem. You are loved! You have a heart of gold, and I am blessed to have you as a friend and a part of my life. Thanks so much for your love, kindness, and prayers. May God continues to keep you in His loving care; you are a blessing to us all here on Fanstory.
Hugs and lots of love...Portia
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Dear Sweet Helen,
I shed tears while reading this beautiful, heartfelt, and very touching poem. You are loved! You have a heart of gold, and I am blessed to have you as a friend and a part of my life. Thanks so much for your love, kindness, and prayers. May God continues to keep you in His loving care; you are a blessing to us all here on Fanstory.
Hugs and lots of love...Portia
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Portia! I didn't think I'd hear from you this week. You must have lots to prepare for. Please know we are all praying and so many love you here! Thank you for reading and may you be strengthened daily with the Lord's healing presence! Hugs and lots of love back!! 💖