Swept Away
Short poem, a bit abstract35 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
A very touching poem. Enjoy today..,time passes. Let the past be in the past, like you said, once things be swept away, they don't come back
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Hope for the better future
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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A very touching poem. Enjoy today..,time passes. Let the past be in the past, like you said, once things be swept away, they don't come back
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Hope for the better future
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
I appreciate it.
Comment from MH Klemens
I find this to be an amazingly sensitive poem written by a talented poet.
To me, it seems that the author is painfully and sadly aware of the passing of his life; that the power of nature influences his thoughts. His past is gone; shall it be replanted? The choice of a dark ending or a new life
created by his efforts. Much to think about. Thank you for writing it.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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I find this to be an amazingly sensitive poem written by a talented poet.
To me, it seems that the author is painfully and sadly aware of the passing of his life; that the power of nature influences his thoughts. His past is gone; shall it be replanted? The choice of a dark ending or a new life
created by his efforts. Much to think about. Thank you for writing it.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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And most certainly, thank you for reading it.
Comment from amahra
I just showed this poem to my muse and made him stand in the corner until he comes up with writing as good as this. He's still pouting, so I guess it'll be a while. Great poem.
Wind whips
my paper
beautifully,
magnificently,
before my
fading eyesight. [my favorite lines]
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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I just showed this poem to my muse and made him stand in the corner until he comes up with writing as good as this. He's still pouting, so I guess it'll be a while. Great poem.
Wind whips
my paper
beautifully,
magnificently,
before my
fading eyesight. [my favorite lines]
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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This is so nice of you. I am laughing at ur muses predicament as well. Thanks, Doug.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Interesting...it has a lot of weak spots but I get the gist of what you are trying to say.
The abstract art fits your strange poem to a tee.
This is quite the unusual poetry that only you know how to do so well!
I hope this makes sense, I haven't been quite myself lately either.
Thanks for posting and have a good day, my friend,
Jesse
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Interesting...it has a lot of weak spots but I get the gist of what you are trying to say.
The abstract art fits your strange poem to a tee.
This is quite the unusual poetry that only you know how to do so well!
I hope this makes sense, I haven't been quite myself lately either.
Thanks for posting and have a good day, my friend,
Jesse
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Hi Jesse, I was hoping you?d see this. I am currently stuck in hospital getting over MSSA infection-requires 4 more weeks IV antibiotics. Sheesh. But I feel fine. I hope U are well also?
Thank you,
Doug
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am pretty sue muses tend to write almost everything written. I know my muse takes over my writing. Thank you for sharing and let your muse know he/she did a good job.
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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I am pretty sue muses tend to write almost everything written. I know my muse takes over my writing. Thank you for sharing and let your muse know he/she did a good job.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you, dear.
