Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Very nice. A well penned and very lovely piece of poetry. I like how the final lines lead almost to a beginning...and another end, with the rot/take? Anyway well done kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021

Thank you, dear.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Short and a bit abstract but I too like it. Sometimes our muse knows us best.

Creative piece with and a thought provoking image in "Swept Away".

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021

Thank you, Janet

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

I am sure - are we talking about a hopelessly failing eyesight? (lol). Your poem is a bit enigmatic and could be interpreted in different ways. I liked your poetic rant with vivid imagery, visuals, great artwork and presentation. Your muse wrote it? It's in a good shape. I'll send my muse to her.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021

Ha. Thank you so much.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We see our life speeding by at the speed of light and our scribbles become ancient relics as we go, but we strive to stay alive! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

Thank you. Good interpretation.

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

This is very introspective posting expressed in a creative poetic way. It is like a stream of consciousness writing that I enjoyed reading and arriving at a personal interpretation of the message.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

Thank you.

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

I loved this and those sassy muses think they know everything... however... your muse did a very good job gelling the image to the font to the colors to the words... yours, diana

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

Thank you, Diana

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Your writing and your words may well have been whipped away, but they are then scattered to others to share. All our writing in the end will "fly away" and be no more, but there is still a legacy for others which like a kernel, may grow into something big. Abstract, but thought-provoking. Not sure if I have wel understood your intentions with this one. But I enjoyed the thinking process.
Wendy

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

And that is what counts. Thank you, dear.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Doug,
This is a philosophical free verse on how a part of you is taken away with each poem you write. Each is a kernal you can plant to grow in you or someone else or let rot if not shared.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Thank you, Joan. I love that take. Doug

reply by dragonpoet on 13-Oct-2021

Don't mentionit, Doug.
Joan

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I'm sorry for no six, Doug dear. Please accept a high five. Marvelous muse or you, this is a fantastic favorite. Something simple can morph into something beautiful, as seen here.
Sending you and yours my very best,
Sal :))

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Awe, thanks Sally. I truly always love to hear from you.

Doug

reply by Sally Law on 13-Oct-2021

You are most welcome!
Sal :))

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Swept Away
by victortouche

Very interesting poem about human life experience, life and death, etc...
Good short poem form. It moves along nicely. Well done, my friend.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021

Thank you very much.

Doug