Fayette Flatts
A Tale Of Sweet Revenge33 total reviews
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
So, Brett:
I suppose the question that goes with this sixer is "Are you going to expand this so your readers can learn what the secret of Fayette Flatts is"? With your abilities, I bet you could spin quite a story to go with this.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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So, Brett:
I suppose the question that goes with this sixer is "Are you going to expand this so your readers can learn what the secret of Fayette Flatts is"? With your abilities, I bet you could spin quite a story to go with this.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Had not thought of that, but may. Appreciate the review.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, interesting. Despite the length, there seems to be a lot of backstory missing. We have different people doing things not in their interest, or In some cases downright deadly to themselves for no real reason. Very curious.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Hmm, interesting. Despite the length, there seems to be a lot of backstory missing. We have different people doing things not in their interest, or In some cases downright deadly to themselves for no real reason. Very curious.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Silverman died to protect the real killer. Any notion who she was?
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oops shoot by mistake, that's how many legends are dying and leaving their fame to trail behind. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Oops shoot by mistake, that's how many legends are dying and leaving their fame to trail behind. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I would guess either Billie or Shawn Silverman's twin brother was at the crime scene. (Fire)Since you didn't use first names for the twins I suspect the twin was the one shot and buried. I can only guess. Well done Brett. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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I would guess either Billie or Shawn Silverman's twin brother was at the crime scene. (Fire)Since you didn't use first names for the twins I suspect the twin was the one shot and buried. I can only guess. Well done Brett. Nancy:)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Actually Floyd was killed.
Silverman is not the killer though.
He died to keep the real killer a secret.
Any notion who she is?
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I would guess it was Billie.
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Yes it was.
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Billie.
Comment from Eunice Amero
Love to know the secret. Too bad Silverman was such a bad man. Some people never learn. Thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best. You did a good job. Good luck
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Love to know the secret. Too bad Silverman was such a bad man. Some people never learn. Thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best. You did a good job. Good luck
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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The secret is Silverman died to protect the real killer. Any notion who she was? Appreciate the review.
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Really he wasn't as bad as l thought. You are more than welcome
Comment from SimianSavant
This is quite the story, leaving the reader with questions. Does Silverman want to leave Floyd and his fiance with guilt over his death, or is there something else going on (a disguise, mistaken identity)? The narration suggests it is the former. Well done and thanks for the exciting read!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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This is quite the story, leaving the reader with questions. Does Silverman want to leave Floyd and his fiance with guilt over his death, or is there something else going on (a disguise, mistaken identity)? The narration suggests it is the former. Well done and thanks for the exciting read!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
Actually, the secret of Fayette Flatts is Silverman's willingness to die to protect the real killer.
Any notion who that may be?
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It did mention his twin brother? am I right?
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Nope. Billie Olsen.
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I reread the story and NOW I get it : )
Comment from amahra
Very descriptive writing.
Like molasses run through a sieve, Silverman slowly turned around. He pointed his pistol at the sheriff. [interesting simile of Sliverman turn around] Very good chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Very descriptive writing.
Like molasses run through a sieve, Silverman slowly turned around. He pointed his pistol at the sheriff. [interesting simile of Sliverman turn around] Very good chapter.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from oliver818
This is a very well told story, I enjoyed reading it a lot. The characters are so real and gritty. I liked the descriptions too. One thing though-
See you back in town, Shawn."
"That I am," Silverman replied. No desire to be bothered, he asked.
I think his reply is illogical, so maybe you deleted some part and forgot to change this?
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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This is a very well told story, I enjoyed reading it a lot. The characters are so real and gritty. I liked the descriptions too. One thing though-
See you back in town, Shawn."
"That I am," Silverman replied. No desire to be bothered, he asked.
I think his reply is illogical, so maybe you deleted some part and forgot to change this?
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this tale. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Soledadpaz
One has to wonder what possessed Floyd to approach a hot-tempered man like Silverman and willingly proffer such a damming confession, unprovoked and unasked.
Excellent imagery: gnarled like knuckles on a withered hand
My, in effect, Silverman committed suicide. How sad.
An intriguing story.
Sol
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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One has to wonder what possessed Floyd to approach a hot-tempered man like Silverman and willingly proffer such a damming confession, unprovoked and unasked.
Excellent imagery: gnarled like knuckles on a withered hand
My, in effect, Silverman committed suicide. How sad.
An intriguing story.
Sol
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Had not thought of Silverman's getting shot as a form of suicide. Adds another dimension to the tale.
My point with that event was he died to protect the real killer.
Any notions on who that might be?
Appreciate your view of Silverman's getting shot.
Comment from dmt1967
This story kept my attention from start to finish. Not once did my mind wander and I loved it and thought it was very well written. One of the best story I have read in a long while. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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This story kept my attention from start to finish. Not once did my mind wander and I loved it and thought it was very well written. One of the best story I have read in a long while. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Appreciate the sixer and review. Glad you enjoyed this tale.
