Listen
I love to hear birds sing.21 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
You would get on well with my wife friend, she also loves birdsong and birds of course. We have some great singers over here in NZ and they are not at all shy when it comes to showing off their range : ) Nice!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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You would get on well with my wife friend, she also loves birdsong and birds of course. We have some great singers over here in NZ and they are not at all shy when it comes to showing off their range : ) Nice!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed you contest entry,Pookie. Good job with the style of the cinquain. I like the touch of rhyme. Your words flow smoothly and tell a great little story. The picture of the two birds is beautiful. I love to hear all birds, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed you contest entry,Pookie. Good job with the style of the cinquain. I like the touch of rhyme. Your words flow smoothly and tell a great little story. The picture of the two birds is beautiful. I love to hear all birds, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks very much.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Beautifully done, Pookietoo! The rhymes work very well, and the syllable count is spot on. I can almost hear the birds in my mind, singing those sweet songs for us. Your picture and presentation are also lovely.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Beautifully done, Pookietoo! The rhymes work very well, and the syllable count is spot on. I can almost hear the birds in my mind, singing those sweet songs for us. Your picture and presentation are also lovely.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks, I asked you earlier if the poem sounded okay.
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Yes, I remember :-)
God bless you!
Love, Mary Kay xoxo
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God bless you too.
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Thank you!
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Welcome.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yes, I too love to sit and listen to the birds singing from the trees and gardens all around. A lovely cinquain poem Pookie about the birds
singing some songs for you and me
Good luck in the contest.
cheers
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Yes, I too love to sit and listen to the birds singing from the trees and gardens all around. A lovely cinquain poem Pookie about the birds
singing some songs for you and me
Good luck in the contest.
cheers
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks very much!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Listen', is short, sweet and delightfully descriptive. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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'Listen', is short, sweet and delightfully descriptive. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thanks very much.
You're very welcome!
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Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a nice, cheerful poem which is just what I needed this morning after reading so many sad ones. The picture is very colorful and appealing as well. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a nice, cheerful poem which is just what I needed this morning after reading so many sad ones. The picture is very colorful and appealing as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
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You're welcome.
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:)
Comment from Sandra Barlow
I don't know anything about cinquain. Presumably, it means 5 lines. Cinque being five in French. Well, I do love listening to birds sing. We have five cockatiels here and I love it when they sing. So beautiful words. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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I don't know anything about cinquain. Presumably, it means 5 lines. Cinque being five in French. Well, I do love listening to birds sing. We have five cockatiels here and I love it when they sing. So beautiful words. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
As it is said a bird does not sing because it has an answer, it sings because it has a song. Your wonderfully penned short poem amply describes it in a few words. Much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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As it is said a bird does not sing because it has an answer, it sings because it has a song. Your wonderfully penned short poem amply describes it in a few words. Much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing!Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice happy poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and the imagery creates a nice scene. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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This is a nice happy poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and the imagery creates a nice scene. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Welcome. You too.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Cinquain Poetry contest entry speaks we should listen to the birds sing they fly from tree to tree and sing for everyone; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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This Cinquain Poetry contest entry speaks we should listen to the birds sing they fly from tree to tree and sing for everyone; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Welcome
