Heaven or Hell
One, Nine , One11 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I like this entry for the 1-9-1 poetry contest. It's not easy to convey any kind of message with only a set number of syllables to work with. I liked your poem. The picture enhanced it nicely. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I like this entry for the 1-9-1 poetry contest. It's not easy to convey any kind of message with only a set number of syllables to work with. I liked your poem. The picture enhanced it nicely. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Hi Patty .
Thank you very much For your review I am thrilled with a second placing in this contest Cheers Chris
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Hi writer723 Thank you very much for your review and lovely comments
I am so pleased also with a second place in this contest
Cheers Chris
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the 1-9-1 Poem writing prompt Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the 1-9-1 Poem writing prompt Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. Good luck!
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Hi Gypsy Thank you for your review and I am really pleased with a second place in this contest.
Cheers Chrisx
Comment from samantha0930
I like your poem, and the picture that goes with it is interesting too. I also like the two different colors in the font, which matches the colors in the picture. I think it would be even better though if you make the background black; it would look more dramatic and match the picture even better. :)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I like your poem, and the picture that goes with it is interesting too. I also like the two different colors in the font, which matches the colors in the picture. I think it would be even better though if you make the background black; it would look more dramatic and match the picture even better. :)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Hi Samantha..,
Thank you for your review and comments. I am also pleased with a second placing in this contest but see what you mean but will keep it as is
Cheers Chris
Comment from Nicholas Guay
I don't think you have fully conveyed your meaning.
You're defining Hell but not defining heaven.
Does Hell not let us in as well?
Does Heaven have fury if Hell doesn't?
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I don't think you have fully conveyed your meaning.
You're defining Hell but not defining heaven.
Does Hell not let us in as well?
Does Heaven have fury if Hell doesn't?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Hi Nicholas Thank you for your review and to let you know I placed second in this contest so I am really pleased
I try not to over think things but appreciate your point of view
Cheers Christine
Comment from pookietoo
I like this 191 poem. It is true. Heaven lets us in. I wanted to enter this contest, but it filled up before I had the chance to enter. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I like this 191 poem. It is true. Heaven lets us in. I wanted to enter this contest, but it filled up before I had the chance to enter. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Ho pookietoo, Thank you for reading my 1/9/1 I though of this and got my entry in Just in time I think
Cheers
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Welcome
Comment from Wendy G
The reader continues the saying in his mind. Hell is indeed full of fury and self righteousness whereas heaven is freely available if we will in faith acknowledge the One who makes it so. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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The reader continues the saying in his mind. Hell is indeed full of fury and self righteousness whereas heaven is freely available if we will in faith acknowledge the One who makes it so. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Hi Wendy Thank you for your review Something to mull over
Cheers
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A powerful write of good and evil here and we all know which side we would rather be on, a poignant presentation with a message we all understand, love Dolly xx
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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A powerful write of good and evil here and we all know which side we would rather be on, a poignant presentation with a message we all understand, love Dolly xx
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Hi Dolly Thanks for reading this 1/9/1 Yes me too
Cheers
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Great picture you hit your mark great topic once again this is a great read keep up the good work thank you for sharing I hope you do very well in the contest keep up the good work really though
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Great picture you hit your mark great topic once again this is a great read keep up the good work thank you for sharing I hope you do very well in the contest keep up the good work really though
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Hi Giftedone thank you for your review much appreciated
Cheers
Comment from Eunice Amero
IT is so a shame to see people who you can say I am sure they are going to hell. They make excuses and try to call God a liar. Heaven is a lovely place and I thank God I am ready to go. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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IT is so a shame to see people who you can say I am sure they are going to hell. They make excuses and try to call God a liar. Heaven is a lovely place and I thank God I am ready to go. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Hi Eunice , Thank you for your review and kind six stars for my 1-9-1 poem. Just a thought for today
Cheers Chris
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You are more than welcome.