Leaves Falling
Grounds covered by falling leaves.6 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I really enjoyed reading your intriguing poem. It drew me in and held my attention throughout. Your description of this scenario was quite thought-provoking and emotional. Your writing skills are excellent and you have a wonderful gift of expression.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your review, made me chuckle when you said that it held your attention throughout it since it was only three lines Hah Hah Hah Hah Hah. I appreciate the time you took.
Comment from karenina
I love this one. I read all the entries. Some were very good. Yours, however hit the mark with the chosen photo, the delightfully fall-like "foliage" changing colors in your font...and oh yes, the words! Guess it'll be no surprise which one is getting my vote, right? Dear anonymous--I hope you win!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I love this one. I read all the entries. Some were very good. Yours, however hit the mark with the chosen photo, the delightfully fall-like "foliage" changing colors in your font...and oh yes, the words! Guess it'll be no surprise which one is getting my vote, right? Dear anonymous--I hope you win!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Lol, thank you for your nice review and your vote.
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You are welcome!
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Comment from samantha0930
I like your poem and the rhyming, and sprawl is a really good word to use for the leaves on the ground. The middle line is kind of distracting though. I like that you used different colors, but I think it would look better is you made the second line all red instead of a bunch of colors. Having each word a different color makes you pause after each word so the line doesn't flow well. But I think it would look nice for the first line to stay orange and have the middle line be all red and the last line still be brown.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I like your poem and the rhyming, and sprawl is a really good word to use for the leaves on the ground. The middle line is kind of distracting though. I like that you used different colors, but I think it would look better is you made the second line all red instead of a bunch of colors. Having each word a different color makes you pause after each word so the line doesn't flow well. But I think it would look nice for the first line to stay orange and have the middle line be all red and the last line still be brown.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you, I felt the same way about the 2nd line as you, but I had another really like it. Thank You for your review.
Comment from patricia dillon
Leaves falling is a familiar poetic image. Autumn (or Fall) seems to lend itself to inspiration. I liked the multi-coloured font and the illustration.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Leaves falling is a familiar poetic image. Autumn (or Fall) seems to lend itself to inspiration. I liked the multi-coloured font and the illustration.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your review!
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You're welcome
Comment from Hitcher
One mans autumn is another mans spring : )) I live in NZ and it is spring hear and the sprawl is all gone. A beautiful picture there, makes one miss autumn almost... almost, ha ha. good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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One mans autumn is another mans spring : )) I live in NZ and it is spring hear and the sprawl is all gone. A beautiful picture there, makes one miss autumn almost... almost, ha ha. good luck!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Lol, thank you for your review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I love the picture you paired with your well thought out words. Good job with the syllable count per line, the end rhymes, the color scheme, and the overall presentation. The middle line is hidden in the tiny font. I would make it a bit larger.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I love the picture you paired with your well thought out words. Good job with the syllable count per line, the end rhymes, the color scheme, and the overall presentation. The middle line is hidden in the tiny font. I would make it a bit larger.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thank You so much for your review and suggestion, I fixed the font to be bigger. I did notice the same thing.
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Look gret
Looks great! 😊
