Trip the Light Fantastic!
Experiencing Lucid dreaming and the discoveries I've made.52 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You should pack up your bags and travel to a place that has such water falls. It might be in South America or Africa. I love to travel and this dream is a calling for you to experience nature.
Well done.
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You should pack up your bags and travel to a place that has such water falls. It might be in South America or Africa. I love to travel and this dream is a calling for you to experience nature.
Well done.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is really very good and a neat idea. Cat's tails don't lie; wish everyone had them. As a child I saw my sister and a neighbor boy attacked by a dog with its tail between its legs; dogs do lie. I would change ...it could be...to it was quite fantastic (to be in the same tense as rest of paragraph). There is also a missing word . . . I don't know if (I) will like it . . . The sentences beginning Wow and What a different . . . should be in the same paragraph. The phrase "trip the light fantastic" is linked in my mind to Fred Astaire; don't know why. You have done very well with this. Have you tried to have it published and get paid for it?
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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This is really very good and a neat idea. Cat's tails don't lie; wish everyone had them. As a child I saw my sister and a neighbor boy attacked by a dog with its tail between its legs; dogs do lie. I would change ...it could be...to it was quite fantastic (to be in the same tense as rest of paragraph). There is also a missing word . . . I don't know if (I) will like it . . . The sentences beginning Wow and What a different . . . should be in the same paragraph. The phrase "trip the light fantastic" is linked in my mind to Fred Astaire; don't know why. You have done very well with this. Have you tried to have it published and get paid for it?
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Carol! You gave me plenty of good advice, I appreciate it a lot! And, your personal stories are wild!
I haven't tried to publish it, but thanks for the idea! Your kind comments are the best and thanks for the excellent rating and review!
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Wonderful poem it was written great picture causing sides with the words once again this is a brilliant read give me more give me more stay careers thank you for saying
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Wonderful poem it was written great picture causing sides with the words once again this is a brilliant read give me more give me more stay careers thank you for saying
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
Comment from pookietoo
This is a nice commentary. I especially like where you said how I look is not as important as how I come across to others and myself. Happy Columbus Day.
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This is a nice commentary. I especially like where you said how I look is not as important as how I come across to others and myself. Happy Columbus Day.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed reading this post because you expressed honest feelings and raw emotion. You asked questions that we all have had at one time in our life. How do people really see us? Do they ever lie to protect us from reality? Do we ever admit to others what we see and feel about them? Personally, I don't care what other people think about me. I DO care that I am the best me I can be and that I don't let MYSELF down. Keep writing, and I will keep reading. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed reading this post because you expressed honest feelings and raw emotion. You asked questions that we all have had at one time in our life. How do people really see us? Do they ever lie to protect us from reality? Do we ever admit to others what we see and feel about them? Personally, I don't care what other people think about me. I DO care that I am the best me I can be and that I don't let MYSELF down. Keep writing, and I will keep reading. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Is your name, Linda? I am not sure and I love to address readers by name if it is possible. I am wowed by your super review, my newfound friend!
You ask such wonderful questions and offer some interesting answers to the question I posed to all the readers.
I also care mostly about doing my best, and not letting myself down!
I am so thrilled to accept an exceptional rating from you, Linda!?
I will keep writing as much as I can.
Thank you for your kind words and comments!
Have a lovely rest of your week,
Jesse
Comment from mermaids
I like your idea about all of us having tails like a cat. It is an interesting image and very humorous. I love vivid dreams, they add to our lives and can be quite pleasant. You have written a thought provoking essay for the reader.
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I like your idea about all of us having tails like a cat. It is an interesting image and very humorous. I love vivid dreams, they add to our lives and can be quite pleasant. You have written a thought provoking essay for the reader.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jesse, I'm sure we all have moments when we relive things more vividly than at other times. The older we get we tend to carry more memories. Often that involves people who've been close to us, and places we've been to sharing with our dear ones. I liked your piece. Ulla:)))
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Hi Jesse, I'm sure we all have moments when we relive things more vividly than at other times. The older we get we tend to carry more memories. Often that involves people who've been close to us, and places we've been to sharing with our dear ones. I liked your piece. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't know for sure if having wild dreams all the time is good, but there are some that I would certainly like to go back and have over every day and night. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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I don't know for sure if having wild dreams all the time is good, but there are some that I would certainly like to go back and have over every day and night. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Ric, for your honest review.
All the time is not the point, Ric. It is the ones that are fantastic that I would like to have over and over again!
I appreciate your candor and sincerity.
Ric, you are the best, for sure!
Have a fantastic dreamy night,
Jesse
Comment from Mike Stevens
A fine true story, Jesse--I find I very rarely remember my dreams, which in my case at least, it probably a good thing, as I know how disturbed I am and I can just imagine!
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A fine true story, Jesse--I find I very rarely remember my dreams, which in my case at least, it probably a good thing, as I know how disturbed I am and I can just imagine!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Dear Jesse,
Your post is moving and interesting. I too have very vivid dreams that I chalk up to my having an active imagination or keeping ones who have passed or those in my life close.
As I too am always questioning what people think of me. But I will tell you that the people in your life are there because they want to be with you.
I would not want to know what people would be thinking as to what fun would it be to get to know them?
Best wishes
Mary
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Dear Jesse,
Your post is moving and interesting. I too have very vivid dreams that I chalk up to my having an active imagination or keeping ones who have passed or those in my life close.
As I too am always questioning what people think of me. But I will tell you that the people in your life are there because they want to be with you.
I would not want to know what people would be thinking as to what fun would it be to get to know them?
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
