The Full Moon
Contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is a nice haiku. I remember walking down a dirt road at night on nights when the moon was full. The light was so bright it was almost like day and the feeling of walking in the moonlight is something everyone should experience. People who live in the city never know this pleasure.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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This is a nice haiku. I remember walking down a dirt road at night on nights when the moon was full. The light was so bright it was almost like day and the feeling of walking in the moonlight is something everyone should experience. People who live in the city never know this pleasure.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very lovely Haiku poem. The light of a full moon gives us a sense of comfort and peace as it lights our way. Your words capture the security that the light of the moon gives us.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for the read.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Very lovely Haiku poem. The light of a full moon gives us a sense of comfort and peace as it lights our way. Your words capture the security that the light of the moon gives us.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for the read.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise haiku is lovely and descriptive. It conveys an appealing message about the full moon and how light helps us stay on our chosen path and gives a safe feeling.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Your ultra-concise haiku is lovely and descriptive. It conveys an appealing message about the full moon and how light helps us stay on our chosen path and gives a safe feeling.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from kahpot
Love the content in your words as they give the reader an image of peace and safety, if I may, this haiku contest does say-this haiku has no rhyme I am wondering if your internal rhyme will or will not be accepted, very well written and best wishes****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Love the content in your words as they give the reader an image of peace and safety, if I may, this haiku contest does say-this haiku has no rhyme I am wondering if your internal rhyme will or will not be accepted, very well written and best wishes****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry speaks simply and vividly the full moon is so bright that it lights poet's way in the night; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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This Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry speaks simply and vividly the full moon is so bright that it lights poet's way in the night; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from mermaids
I love reading poems about the moon. Your poem reminds me when I am driving at night and see a full moon, it does light the way. Excellent haiku form that creates a clear scene of nature.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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I love reading poems about the moon. Your poem reminds me when I am driving at night and see a full moon, it does light the way. Excellent haiku form that creates a clear scene of nature.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your kind review. I often see the full moon early in the morning on my daily walks.
