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Unfortunately, Yours....

Maybelline Green and Her Pets

28 total reviews 
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
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Sally - Fortunately, this is a fun ditty that fits the theme of the contest. And, fortunately I enjoyed it and will vote for it. And, fortunately there are NO UNfortunatlys - Jerry

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you, Jerry. How fortunate I am. Blessings always,
    Sally :))
Comment from pookietoo
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A greatcentry in this contest. I wish you lots of luck in the Keep smiling and writing great poems.
Have a wonderful night. Best wishes. Enjoy the little things that matter most.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you very much for your kind review and comments. It is most appreciated and needed. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
reply by pookietoo on 02-Nov-2021
    Welcome.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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The literary technique of juxtaposition hold this account together. It will draw the reader in and grant amusement. This might have been a weary account but with your cleverness it was quite droll.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my silliness. It is most appreciated. Sending along my very best to you as always, Sally XOs
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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ha! ha! I thoroughly enjoyed this cleverly written post with alternation. I found it amusing and was rooting for the pets alternately! Very believable story. Thanks very much for sharing. Good luck!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind compliment. Sending my very best, Sally :))
Comment from Begin Again
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An amusing story about our lovable furbabies and what we go through to have them at our side. My only thought is.... I believe and I could be wrong... but every sentence must start with Fortunately or Unfortunately. You do have some that don't. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.

Hugs, Carol

Happy Halloween and have a great day!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind comments. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
Comment from Kooky Clown
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What a lovely tail and I can picture children enjoying it especially about the pillow being buried and then washed and not Sir Cat, I can picture laughing at the bracketed references. Loved it. Kooky.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally :))
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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I like this Miss Sally. It is entertaining, funny and has a
clever ending with the alternation of - fortunately -
and unfortunately. I like the way this story played out
in simple terms of how the dog affected the household
and poor Sir Cat, unfortunately. Well done. Enjoy the
six shower :-) ~DDxo

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Aw? thank you so much, dear DD! I?m glad you enjoyed my silliness. Sending you my best today as always and many thanks,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, this is very inventive and a fun post to read Sally, I love how you told this story to make it unusual and still have sympathy for both cats and dogs, much enjoyed, a magical write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and the stars. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. Sending along with very best today as always, dear Dolly. Sally XOs
Comment from Ben Colder
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The reason I do not have a pet in my house. I love animals. I feed the birds and squirrels and that is enough. I can see this unfolding. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review. I?m so glad you enjoyed it and got a good laugh. Sending along my very best today as always, Sally :))
Comment from Sankey
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This was a funny read. I hope you do well in the contest. Looking forward to the Blind Girl again tomorrow. Geat story. Definitely your style. No spags.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars! I am delighted you enjoyed this silly thing. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs