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Love and Living

My best shot at a six word poem.

4 total reviews 
Comment from irishauthorme
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Correcto Mundo! An entire philosophy in just six words. Damn shame more people do not realize that. Just can't fathom the haters, I could not live like that.
Also have faith that in the final reckoning, Love will prevail. Cheers, irish

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
    I would like to think I have lived my whole life like those six words. I am with you. I steer clear of haters and negative people. I love life and thank God every day for it.
Comment from Sally Law
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I like this, and in pink, for pity sake! You sure know how to please the womenfolk. Great entry in only six words, Richard. :)

Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Sally, As usual your reviews inspire my efforts to try different forms of writing.
    I am not sure how much writing or reading I will be doing on FanStory for awhile. I am working with an editor on my book. That is a priority.
    I would like to think my writing has improved since I started with FanStory. It is thanks to people such as yourself that have helped me.
    My best wishes to you!!

    Richard
Comment from Cogitator
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On the edge of six. You have captured the true relationship of giving, loving to give, giving to love, living to love, loving to live, all in a simple six-word statement. Rather impressive, I say...John

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thank you so much for those kind words. This is my first attempt at any type of poetry. My mother and her father were very good.
Comment from Eunice Amero
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You can love too much and also give too much. Its l nice piece. Just make sure you dont give too much or love too much because some people take advanage of you.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
    Thank you so much for the wise words. I have been guilty of those words. That is was inspired me to write this six word poem.
reply by Eunice Amero on 09-Oct-2021
    You are welcome