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Comment from Edward Escobar
Well defined while full of spirituality. Your words that demonstrated a part of God's love for all, and you were on point with this poem. Much enjoyed. Ed
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Well defined while full of spirituality. Your words that demonstrated a part of God's love for all, and you were on point with this poem. Much enjoyed. Ed
Comment Written 12-Oct-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your statement is true and scripturally accurate. In the Bible, First John, Chapter 4, the 8th verse says, "He who does not love does not know God, for God is love." God teaches compassion, tolerance, and acceptance. Your message is clear and necessary for today's time.
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Your statement is true and scripturally accurate. In the Bible, First John, Chapter 4, the 8th verse says, "He who does not love does not know God, for God is love." God teaches compassion, tolerance, and acceptance. Your message is clear and necessary for today's time.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise words do belief here Brian and I admire your fine words as compassion and tolerance is essential and finally we accept things we cannot change, love Dolly x
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Wise words do belief here Brian and I admire your fine words as compassion and tolerance is essential and finally we accept things we cannot change, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
Comment from SMASH52
Great start! Tell the reader more about these qualities; how you've seen them in YOUR life. This is the makings of a poem that doubles as a tract.
Explaining what God is helps one to understand what Satan is not. BOGO
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Great start! Tell the reader more about these qualities; how you've seen them in YOUR life. This is the makings of a poem that doubles as a tract.
Explaining what God is helps one to understand what Satan is not. BOGO
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
Comment from tfawcus
Absolutely! What a wonderful world it would be if more humans were created in his image. Still, I guess life wouldn't be so interesting without the continual struggle between good and evil.
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Absolutely! What a wonderful world it would be if more humans were created in his image. Still, I guess life wouldn't be so interesting without the continual struggle between good and evil.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 7 word poem vividly speaks God symbolizes pure love, compassion, tolerance and acceptance; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This 7 word poem vividly speaks God symbolizes pure love, compassion, tolerance and acceptance; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
Comment from Partha Banerjee
Wonderful thoughts. However, I am not sure if the words convey any particular poetic message beyond what you said in the line. If it's a poem, it needs more than a straightforward thought. I hope you understand what I am trying to say here.
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Wonderful thoughts. However, I am not sure if the words convey any particular poetic message beyond what you said in the line. If it's a poem, it needs more than a straightforward thought. I hope you understand what I am trying to say here.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
Comment from Kelley Liberty1
Honest hip to the point poetry praise god.quick witted integrable soulful easyread I do not believe I find anything wrong with this poetry I would seek it out in a store shelf or greeting card
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Honest hip to the point poetry praise god.quick witted integrable soulful easyread I do not believe I find anything wrong with this poetry I would seek it out in a store shelf or greeting card
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
