Tiny Dancer
Haiku Variation 6/7/429 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Oh that's pretty and I love the inspiration. You did a great job at capturing such a pretty little thing. I don't know how many we get to see up close but they certainly can be breathtaking.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Oh that's pretty and I love the inspiration. You did a great job at capturing such a pretty little thing. I don't know how many we get to see up close but they certainly can be breathtaking.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and compliments.
Blessings to you both! Sal XOs...
Comment from Livia Lynch
Beautifully written, literally and metaphorically. I think you chose the font, colours and photo perfectly for this poem, very good job.
I love the flow of it.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Beautifully written, literally and metaphorically. I think you chose the font, colours and photo perfectly for this poem, very good job.
I love the flow of it.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. It is most welcome. Sending you my very best,
Sally :))
Comment from Cindy Warren
The butterfly is beautiful, just like your little poem. Yes, haiku is harder than it looks. This one looks perfect to me. You may have a winner here. Good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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The butterfly is beautiful, just like your little poem. Yes, haiku is harder than it looks. This one looks perfect to me. You may have a winner here. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kindest compliments. Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, so pretty!!
I just LOVE blue butterflies!!
'Petal dancer'...how beautiful and original
this is Miss Sally. You've brightened up
my evening!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Oh, so pretty!!
I just LOVE blue butterflies!!
'Petal dancer'...how beautiful and original
this is Miss Sally. You've brightened up
my evening!! Blessings...
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the beautiful review and compliments, dear one. You always brighten my day. Blessings abundant,
Sal XOs
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Have a lovely weekend!!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the fluttering of this butterfly as it dances and enjoyes its very short life, we remember their visits and we are in awe of their performances, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed the fluttering of this butterfly as it dances and enjoyes its very short life, we remember their visits and we are in awe of their performances, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Dolly dear. I still have flowers and butterflies in the yard. Fall remains a memory.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
You have inspired me to try out other forms of the Haiky poetry. This is so impressive.A lovely short poem with 17 syllables created a vivid imagery. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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You have inspired me to try out other forms of the Haiky poetry. This is so impressive.A lovely short poem with 17 syllables created a vivid imagery. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the beautiful review and compliments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I hope you give this unique form a try.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is pretty, Sally. Nice to see that you are experimenting with various forms of haiku. I'll go on the journey with you. I love haikus. It's really the only form of poetry that I enjoy writing. It's the only form of poetry that I can compose in my head. I think of it driving, etc., then I can just jot it down. And, I feel as though I have accomplished a worthwhile piece of true poetry.
Nice work with this one.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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This is pretty, Sally. Nice to see that you are experimenting with various forms of haiku. I'll go on the journey with you. I love haikus. It's really the only form of poetry that I enjoy writing. It's the only form of poetry that I can compose in my head. I think of it driving, etc., then I can just jot it down. And, I feel as though I have accomplished a worthwhile piece of true poetry.
Nice work with this one.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and comments. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and
nice presentation, Sal.
-Thanks for sharing the
notes about haiku.
-You wrote a very good one
with effective nature and
seasonal imagery.
-I like "silken blue" and
the satori line is very good, too.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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-Lovely image and
nice presentation, Sal.
-Thanks for sharing the
notes about haiku.
-You wrote a very good one
with effective nature and
seasonal imagery.
-I like "silken blue" and
the satori line is very good, too.
-Well done.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind comments. So glad you enjoyed it. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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You are welcome, Sal.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Tiny Dancer', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth. I look forward to reading your next post.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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"Tiny Dancer', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth. I look forward to reading your next post.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Duchess. It is most appreciated. Blessings always,
Sally XOs
Hi Sally,
You deserved the lovely review.
Bless you and have a great weekend,
the Duchess XOx
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This Haiku is very well written! I love the title, Tiny Dancer, and the picture as well!
It is a beautiful sight for sore eyes this late at night for me! I didn't watch the video I am not into that sort of thing. But I grasp the concept well and understand the significance of the butterfly emerging out of a cocoon of a caterpillar! And so we can emerge ourselves into new vistas and new horizons if we so choose to develop our coping-skills and life-skills as well!
Thank you for letting me spout off my personal views be them as they may.
Have a pleasant day,
Jesse
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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This Haiku is very well written! I love the title, Tiny Dancer, and the picture as well!
It is a beautiful sight for sore eyes this late at night for me! I didn't watch the video I am not into that sort of thing. But I grasp the concept well and understand the significance of the butterfly emerging out of a cocoon of a caterpillar! And so we can emerge ourselves into new vistas and new horizons if we so choose to develop our coping-skills and life-skills as well!
Thank you for letting me spout off my personal views be them as they may.
Have a pleasant day,
Jesse
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear Jesse. It means so much. Sending you my very best and blessings always,
Sally :)) xo
