Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Running Blind~Chapter Twenty-One"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
24 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I love your use of onomatopoeia for the helicopter. If the reader didn't know what they sounded like and was unfamiliar with Jonathan Winters, all they need to do is read that aloud. This is good foreshadowing: "Christmas had come early for the prison snitch, or had it?" We definitely will return
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I love your use of onomatopoeia for the helicopter. If the reader didn't know what they sounded like and was unfamiliar with Jonathan Winters, all they need to do is read that aloud. This is good foreshadowing: "Christmas had come early for the prison snitch, or had it?" We definitely will return
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and insightful comments. Sending my very best,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Wendy G
King is such a clever dog! Very impressive identification of Tony Alfanzi, in a courtroom setting. The story continues to intrigue, and not sure what will happen to Tony now, but he will get what he deserves, one way or another.
Wendy
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King is such a clever dog! Very impressive identification of Tony Alfanzi, in a courtroom setting. The story continues to intrigue, and not sure what will happen to Tony now, but he will get what he deserves, one way or another.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and insightful comments. Both mean so much. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from royowen
It would be a bit disturbing to be focused on by a master criminal such as Tony Alfanzi, and his like, even in prison it seems he has arms like tentacles that can grope for and find his victims, clever dog King, well done Sally, good episode, blessings Roy
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It would be a bit disturbing to be focused on by a master criminal such as Tony Alfanzi, and his like, even in prison it seems he has arms like tentacles that can grope for and find his victims, clever dog King, well done Sally, good episode, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the super great review and kind stars, Roy. Blessings,
Sal XOs...
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Most welcome Sally. How?s your shingles?
Comment from Judy Lawless
I like the way you're separating these incidents, Sally. I'm sure in the end they will come together. It will be interesting to see what Alfanza's plan is
to escape prison. He's too smart for his own good.
One little thing: The quotation marks at the beginning of this dialogue are missing.
Respectfully, sir, there are too many coincidences to ignore.
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I like the way you're separating these incidents, Sally. I'm sure in the end they will come together. It will be interesting to see what Alfanza's plan is
to escape prison. He's too smart for his own good.
One little thing: The quotation marks at the beginning of this dialogue are missing.
Respectfully, sir, there are too many coincidences to ignore.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the super review and helpful critique. I will fix that Blessings always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Sankey
This was a curious read. I get lost in the backing and forwarding sometimes. Thanks again. Just one little tiny spag for you, today. in an area know(n) for its sugar cane
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This was a curious read. I get lost in the backing and forwarding sometimes. Thanks again. Just one little tiny spag for you, today. in an area know(n) for its sugar cane
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and stars. I appreciate the spag catcher too. Hope everything is well with you and your love.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from country ranch writer
As per usual my pal sal you kept me glued to your story so good I
couldn't stop reading it a great success! Waiting for you to grace us with more tall tales.will be Looking for more I'd your fine works.
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As per usual my pal sal you kept me glued to your story so good I
couldn't stop reading it a great success! Waiting for you to grace us with more tall tales.will be Looking for more I'd your fine works.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and super stars, Barbara dear. I'm so very blessed and honored. Sending you and yours my very best,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Ben Colder
Tough call on the results of how this will turn out. The dud will more than likely get a shank or the knife sooner or later. Good one, Sal. King, one smart dog.
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Tough call on the results of how this will turn out. The dud will more than likely get a shank or the knife sooner or later. Good one, Sal. King, one smart dog.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars. It means so much. Blessings always,
Sally XOs...
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
Now that the grand jury has convened and the evidence is being presented, it seems clear there are going to be some heavy charges filed and trial is coming. The "dogwitness" testimony has put Tony in the crosshairs if it will stand up.
It appears Tony was saved by the warden in the lock up. His future wasn't looking positive had the guards gotten their way. He and the warden are becoming "Buds" for now.
PAL Z
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Hello Sal.
Now that the grand jury has convened and the evidence is being presented, it seems clear there are going to be some heavy charges filed and trial is coming. The "dogwitness" testimony has put Tony in the crosshairs if it will stand up.
It appears Tony was saved by the warden in the lock up. His future wasn't looking positive had the guards gotten their way. He and the warden are becoming "Buds" for now.
PAL Z
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars. Tony idps a mess. He's fun to cast as a character though. Sending you my best today as always, dear Z,
Sal :))
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You're welcome Sal.
PAL Z 😁
Comment from BethShelby
I am really enjoying the story. I find it particularly interesting as it is set in the part of the country where I lived for quite a few years. The crimes you solve in your stories always make good reading. I always look forward to the nest entry.
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I am really enjoying the story. I find it particularly interesting as it is set in the part of the country where I lived for quite a few years. The crimes you solve in your stories always make good reading. I always look forward to the nest entry.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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I'm delighted you're enjoying this, Beth dear. I'm so honored.
Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think I missed one, Sal! I've been flat out with back problems all week, and still very sore. I'll have to go back and check. This was excellent. I loved it that King went and identified the villian who hurt you. I do love that dog! Now, that was really lucky for Tony, he was almost dead meat! This was a wonderful chapter, Sal. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
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I think I missed one, Sal! I've been flat out with back problems all week, and still very sore. I'll have to go back and check. This was excellent. I loved it that King went and identified the villian who hurt you. I do love that dog! Now, that was really lucky for Tony, he was almost dead meat! This was a wonderful chapter, Sal. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much!! I'm so sorry to be late with this. I've had shingles and they have knocked me down! The tiredness and the itching...! I'm doing better but I didn't think I'd get this chapter to posting. Your six made me feel so wonderful. Thank you, Sandra dear!
Blessings always,
Sal XOs...
