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Mistakes Happen

Learn from them

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Comment from Cogitator
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This fits the bill and speaks to the enneagram in all of us. The flow to and through the conclusion is surely a self-improvement process. Enjoyed the read very much...John

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021

Comment from Mary Shifman
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Yes, we all make mistakes that we kick ourselves for and mull over for days wishing we'd done things differently. I have to keep my temper in check and think things through. Too often I speak in the heat of the moment and regret it later. I think your poem is good advice and very well written and expressed.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thank you for your encouragement and rating. So very much appreciated.
reply by Mary Shifman on 05-Oct-2021
    You are very welcome.
Comment from nandimandisa
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Certainly a lesson for anyone who has ever made a mistake. This poems speaks wisdom to us all. Sometimes our mistakes cost us a lot of heartache,, pain and loss. It is always best to slow down, be patient, pay close attention to what you are doing, take time to learn how to do things properly. I also like how you made sure to speak of your self worth; I am intelligent, gifted and wise. We must know how to pick ourselves up after we let ourselves down. Good job on this.

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021