Dual purpose
Entry43 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Cogitator, this is very clever. Not a lot one can say in just eight words, but you have packed a lot into your piece of work here. Three lines and each one gives a strong, sensible fact. A winner I would think. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Hello Cogitator, this is very clever. Not a lot one can say in just eight words, but you have packed a lot into your piece of work here. Three lines and each one gives a strong, sensible fact. A winner I would think. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever wordplay. Certainly some will consider this profound--I am hopelessly literal-minded; thus, I am baffled. Does it matter to you that this makes no sense to me so long as I give you five stars?
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Clever wordplay. Certainly some will consider this profound--I am hopelessly literal-minded; thus, I am baffled. Does it matter to you that this makes no sense to me so long as I give you five stars?
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Comment from pookietoo
I live the 8 words. I live how you used sense and matter in different ways. That is creative. I wish you good luck and best wishes. Have a wonderful night.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I live the 8 words. I live how you used sense and matter in different ways. That is creative. I wish you good luck and best wishes. Have a wonderful night.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Welcome. I meant love, not live.
Comment from kahpot
Very intriguing and very clever, an eight word poem using only five different words and with a loop, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Very intriguing and very clever, an eight word poem using only five different words and with a loop, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Dual purpose
Cogitator your entry for the contest does a duel purpose and how you brought out the word Senses from your eight words
Senses Matter ( do matter)
Matter makes sense ( and matter makes sense)
Sense creates matter ( and how clever of you to say, ' common sense creates matter
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Dual purpose
Cogitator your entry for the contest does a duel purpose and how you brought out the word Senses from your eight words
Senses Matter ( do matter)
Matter makes sense ( and matter makes sense)
Sense creates matter ( and how clever of you to say, ' common sense creates matter
Gert
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you
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Cogitator
You are welcome
Gert
Comment from rspoet
Hello John,
You've used your eight words very well, narrowing them down to four.
Without senses or sense, not much would really matter.
And without matter, there would be nothing much to sense.
Nice mirror effect.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Hello John,
You've used your eight words very well, narrowing them down to four.
Without senses or sense, not much would really matter.
And without matter, there would be nothing much to sense.
Nice mirror effect.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Comment from juliaSjames
Whether one understands this write or not ( I'm in the latter category) you've managed to compress a complicated theory into 8 words in a poetic format, loop? swap? I'm not an expert.
The artwork is certainly an example of how senses matter, at least to the male gender.
I'm half amused and half in awe of this write. Does that make sense?
I congratulate you and wish you the best in the contest.
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Whether one understands this write or not ( I'm in the latter category) you've managed to compress a complicated theory into 8 words in a poetic format, loop? swap? I'm not an expert.
The artwork is certainly an example of how senses matter, at least to the male gender.
I'm half amused and half in awe of this write. Does that make sense?
I congratulate you and wish you the best in the contest.
Stay safe
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Comment from Nancy s
Excellent poem. I don't think I'd be able to create such a strong write with so few words. Best of luck in the competition. The buildup you've managed is incredible. Great job!
-Nancy a
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Excellent poem. I don't think I'd be able to create such a strong write with so few words. Best of luck in the competition. The buildup you've managed is incredible. Great job!
-Nancy a
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Comment from Boogienights
A symbiotic relationship if I ever heard of one. This is a clever 8 word poem for the contest because it is right in it's reasoning. Without matter there would be no senses. Thanks for sharing and best if luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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A symbiotic relationship if I ever heard of one. This is a clever 8 word poem for the contest because it is right in it's reasoning. Without matter there would be no senses. Thanks for sharing and best if luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Comment from nandimandisa
Very interesting. Clever play on words. Not sure I totally understand the jest of what is being said or how the picture ties in. Even though I am not getting what this is all about, I do sense that it is conveying a important and relevant point. Maybe for the slow people like myself, a description may have helped
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Very interesting. Clever play on words. Not sure I totally understand the jest of what is being said or how the picture ties in. Even though I am not getting what this is all about, I do sense that it is conveying a important and relevant point. Maybe for the slow people like myself, a description may have helped
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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