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Secrets in the Wind

Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Secrets in the Wind - The End"
A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime

19 total reviews 
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A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
    I feel so blessed that good things are still in my life. Thank you, FanStory.
Comment from Leann DS
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What a lead into a sequel! Awesome!

I only have one question after reading the entire book... What, exactly, happened to Jack?

Your characters were easy to love, or hate. Great character development and awesome plot with lots of twists and turns. Great action! Very realistic dialogue. I just love the whole thing. Look out, James Patterson. Here comes Carol! Hugs and love, me

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thank you for ranking me up there with James Patterson, but I doubt that will ever happen. It's a wonderful thought just to be published, and I hope that will come with time. I have started book 4 and hope I can submit all four books at the same time once this one is done.

    Thanks for continuing to read and for all your kindness.

    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from dmt1967
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This is a very well told story and I liked the way it ended. I hope the story continues as I would like to find out what happened next. Thank you for sharing and have a great day.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    thanks --- Just posted the first two chapters of the new story "Revenge", it's a continuation of Secrets in the Wind. I hope you get a chance to follow it.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Yeah! The next book sounds exciting too. I have so enjoyed this one and I look forward to reading book number 4. I love how you left this ending open leading into another great book.
xxoo Patty

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Thanks, Patty.... I am working on the outline of the next book and hope that you find it just as interesting as this one. I appreciate all your time and reviews.

    Have a great day! Hugs, CArol
Comment from karenina
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Oh you clever author! Winding the perfect ending....into a high tension spring that launches us into another riveting adventure!
Holy cow! Poor Garth and Allie won't even have time for a sip of champagne! This book has been thoroughly enjoyable, Carol. Clearly a labor of love. I can hardly wait for the next to begin! --Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
    Karenina,

    Was the ending a let down since they didn't get their evening together? Maybe I can do better in the next book -- I am working on the outline now but it's a struggle. I just want to climb into the story and forget everything else.

    Thanks for the review and your thoughts. I hope you are doing ok.
    Love ya, Carol
reply by karenina on 05-Oct-2021
    No! It was a slam dunk success! So unexpected, the call, Jazz in crisis! You drive this vehicle like a NASCAR ACE!

    I would not change a thing!

    Karenina
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Wow! This is a great ending to one book and an exciting start to the next! You already have me hooked. I've certainly enjoyed your characters and the tension of this book. You're a terrific writer, and I hope you take the time to get this one published. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Carol for all your support and kindness. I am thrilled that you enjoyed Secrets in the Wind and will continue to follow the saga. I feel blessed to know that so many enjoy what I write.

    Hugs, Carol
reply by Carol Clark2 on 11-Oct-2021
    You're welcome. Thanks for writing such a terrific book! Blessings. Carol
Comment from lyenochka
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Wow! You don't end a book, you dive right into another one. So Garth and Allie will have to postpone their evening of romance and try to figure out who's trying to kill her sister.
Glad you wrapped up all the characters nicely. Great work on all your research to bring the town and the winery business to life! Congrats on finishing!!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much Helen for all your support and kindness. I am thrilled that you enjoyed Secrets in the Wind and will continue to follow the saga. I feel blessed to know that so many enjoy what I write.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am excited about the next book. I can't wait. You have me hooked.

Never. I am looking forward to a quiet evening with you, and who knows where it will lead." Garth smiled, "I haven't felt this good in weeks. And you are the perfect woman to make it even better."(Allie would not know if Garth smiled or not.)

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    As you can see I am far behind on thanking everyone for their wonderful support and reviews. I truly appreciate the kindness.

    Hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I knew you couldn't just let it all go and not throw another unexpected twist in to keep us readers on our toes or glued to our seats. It's been a great ride and I can hardly wait to read where you take us next. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
    I fear we might walk on the dark side of life in the next book.... well dark side for me, not sure about you. LOL Just kidding of course. I'm working on the outline and it's scaring me... If it works, it should be a different roller coaster for sure.

    Thanks for the review and the stars. Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
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You are full of surprises. You end a book with a beginning. I'm glad you writing is off in a new direction. I hope you are doing something about getting the frist three into print. There are a few quesionss left unanswered on this one, which you'll probably put to rest in the next one. You are clever. I'm enjoyinng the ride.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
    Thanks Beth --- I am so glad that everyone enjoyed this book. I know that I loved writing it and hope that the continuation in the next book will meet all expectations.

    Thank you so much for all your support.

    Hugs, Carol