A Question
A short question of life.11 total reviews
Comment from rockinm76233
enjoyed your poem and ponder the question as well. they require to write more but when enough is said, enough is said, again, "good job." Do you prefer poetry over writing stories? Just curious.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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enjoyed your poem and ponder the question as well. they require to write more but when enough is said, enough is said, again, "good job." Do you prefer poetry over writing stories? Just curious.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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I have written poetry since I was young and never thought I had the intelligence to write stories. I got the bug one day and wrote one and then I was hooked. It was fun and even more fun when I was able to win contests with them. I guess I would say it is pretty even now.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I find this poem to be lightly spun, with a deft hand. I enjoyed reading it very much, and my favourite words were:
The child can laugh
And spread her song
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I find this poem to be lightly spun, with a deft hand. I enjoyed reading it very much, and my favourite words were:
The child can laugh
And spread her song
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing, Katherine. I always appreciate honest, thoughtful input. Have a great day.
Comment from Bill Schott
This No-restrictions poem, A Question, seems to ask, "Where is Truth?". The answer seems to be that no matter what life offers, it is only available on a limited basis and all will pass.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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This No-restrictions poem, A Question, seems to ask, "Where is Truth?". The answer seems to be that no matter what life offers, it is only available on a limited basis and all will pass.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for reviewing, Bill. I always appreciate your honest input. Have a great day.
Comment from Wendy G
The ephemeral nature of everything. There is a time and a place for all things, but the time is always brief. This is a thoughtful piece, also provoking thought in the reader. It's a comment on life and its brevity - but is there hope? Well written, and best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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The ephemeral nature of everything. There is a time and a place for all things, but the time is always brief. This is a thoughtful piece, also provoking thought in the reader. It's a comment on life and its brevity - but is there hope? Well written, and best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and kind review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The mistakes that are being made does not bring a smile to anyone's face unless they are selfish in wanting. Nothing last forever; not even a song; so we might as well make the most of our stay.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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The mistakes that are being made does not bring a smile to anyone's face unless they are selfish in wanting. Nothing last forever; not even a song; so we might as well make the most of our stay.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
There is a lot that is going on in this short poem. Your use of rhyme and meter make this poem read very smoothly. It should do very well in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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There is a lot that is going on in this short poem. Your use of rhyme and meter make this poem read very smoothly. It should do very well in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and kind review.
Comment from royowen
I think you've done a fine job with this poem, the free verse and shortness of the length seems to enhance the work, they can have great impact on the sense and imagery of the work, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I think you've done a fine job with this poem, the free verse and shortness of the length seems to enhance the work, they can have great impact on the sense and imagery of the work, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Eternal Muse
That was a good entry for that contest. Good imagery, visuals, the artistic presentation and the choice of an artwork.
I wish you luck in that interesting contest.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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That was a good entry for that contest. Good imagery, visuals, the artistic presentation and the choice of an artwork.
I wish you luck in that interesting contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review.
Comment from bhogg
A poignant short poem. The pleasant rhyme scheme makes this very easy to read. Seemed a bit strange for the fist stanza to be in an almost 'old English' that isn't continued. In any event, well written and structured. Good luck in your contest. Bill
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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A poignant short poem. The pleasant rhyme scheme makes this very easy to read. Seemed a bit strange for the fist stanza to be in an almost 'old English' that isn't continued. In any event, well written and structured. Good luck in your contest. Bill
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This No Restrictions Poetry writing prompt entry speaks a question for life from dawn till night, scarcity of regular food and nothing for refreshment; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This No Restrictions Poetry writing prompt entry speaks a question for life from dawn till night, scarcity of regular food and nothing for refreshment; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review.
