Ticking clock
A modified Ottava rima63 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what meaningful words you write in your poems. You have a way of writing poems that seem to convey the words so clearly.
Hopefully the ticks and the tocks of my clock will see God's love every minute of each day.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
what meaningful words you write in your poems. You have a way of writing poems that seem to convey the words so clearly.
Hopefully the ticks and the tocks of my clock will see God's love every minute of each day.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks Rosemary, for these wonderful comments and an excellent review, well done, blessings Roy
Comment from Irish Rain
'purveyors of His grace'...I love that line in your notes. Beautiful poem Mr. Roy. Time is unlimited, but in our human form, so very limited, urging us to use it wisely. Lovely, blessings...
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
'purveyors of His grace'...I love that line in your notes. Beautiful poem Mr. Roy. Time is unlimited, but in our human form, so very limited, urging us to use it wisely. Lovely, blessings...
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Judy, for your kindness and lovely review, well done, blessings Roy
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Have a great day tomorrow!!
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You too
Comment from scongrove
Beautiful writing, my friend :)
I love this one. The artwork is very lovely as well.
I think this one is another favorite of mine. You have a special gift and I believe God does speak through you as you create each word. They have inspired me for as long as I've known you here.
Thanks for giving me the inspiration in your lovely posts.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
Beautiful writing, my friend :)
I love this one. The artwork is very lovely as well.
I think this one is another favorite of mine. You have a special gift and I believe God does speak through you as you create each word. They have inspired me for as long as I've known you here.
Thanks for giving me the inspiration in your lovely posts.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much dear Shana, for your extreme kindness and lovely review, well done, blessings Roy
Comment from Rebel Jim
You are still there, my Friend!... Those words of wisdom
whether they were GOD sent, or just your own (I figure it's a little of both),
My compliments to your VERY true statement!
Keep them coming, my Friend!!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
You are still there, my Friend!... Those words of wisdom
whether they were GOD sent, or just your own (I figure it's a little of both),
My compliments to your VERY true statement!
Keep them coming, my Friend!!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Jim, for your kindness and lovely review, well done, blessings Roy
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Keep them coming, my Friend!
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Thanks Jim
Comment from Poetofheart2013
What a very beautiful
and touching poem.
So full of really good
Imaging and thoughts
and feeling. I really
enjoyed reading it.
You just keep the
good work!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
What a very beautiful
and touching poem.
So full of really good
Imaging and thoughts
and feeling. I really
enjoyed reading it.
You just keep the
good work!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much, for your kindness and lovely review, well done, blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
Another of your amazing poems that touches the heart right where we are. You certainly are a gift from God Roy and a blessing every time I read your work.
Blessings my friend
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
Another of your amazing poems that touches the heart right where we are. You certainly are a gift from God Roy and a blessing every time I read your work.
Blessings my friend
Janet
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Janet, for your kindness and lovely review, well done, blessings Roy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Ticking clock
by royowen
Excellent modified Ottava rima, Roy. I was not familiar with this form. The presentation is awesome. Time doesn't stop for anybody and as we grow older it goes by faster and faster. Well done!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
Ticking clock
by royowen
Excellent modified Ottava rima, Roy. I was not familiar with this form. The presentation is awesome. Time doesn't stop for anybody and as we grow older it goes by faster and faster. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks Gypsy, for these wonderful comments and an excellent review, well done, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
This is just magnificent and timely. (I just had to say that.) One of my favorites in a sea of favorites.
Eternity's written on the souls of men.... I find in Christ I look forward to my blessed hope and eternal home.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
This is just magnificent and timely. (I just had to say that.) One of my favorites in a sea of favorites.
Eternity's written on the souls of men.... I find in Christ I look forward to my blessed hope and eternal home.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Sally, for your kindness and lovely review, well done, blessings Roy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Your words are hauntingly beautiful, Roy.
I especially appreciate your final two lines...
Time passes far too quickly for me at this stage in my life, yet what I choose to do with that time is of great import. I just hope I do not waste the time I have left...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
Your words are hauntingly beautiful, Roy.
I especially appreciate your final two lines...
Time passes far too quickly for me at this stage in my life, yet what I choose to do with that time is of great import. I just hope I do not waste the time I have left...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Diane, for your kindness and lovely review, well done, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your poem and your deep spiritual reflection about time and its passage. I really loved the last four lines - which reminds me of that Ecclesiastes passage and then moves on to the Corinthians where the Spirit writes on our hearts - the letter of the Lord to others. Beautifully done, Roy!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
Loved your poem and your deep spiritual reflection about time and its passage. I really loved the last four lines - which reminds me of that Ecclesiastes passage and then moves on to the Corinthians where the Spirit writes on our hearts - the letter of the Lord to others. Beautifully done, Roy!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thanks Helen, for these fantastic comments and a very generous review, blessings Roy