The Walrus and the Starfish
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34 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well done Yvonne. Your artwork and your beautifully flowing rhyming poem left me smiling. I could i.agine reading this one to young children and each verse, another picture. Loved it. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Well done Yvonne. Your artwork and your beautifully flowing rhyming poem left me smiling. I could i.agine reading this one to young children and each verse, another picture. Loved it. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 05-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I'm so glad. Thank you so much. It was fun to write.
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a delightful children's poem, reminding us of all the questions children ask. Your picture is well done, much better than I could do. I love the closing lines:
"If I find out, you can depend
I'll share it all with you."
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This is a delightful children's poem, reminding us of all the questions children ask. Your picture is well done, much better than I could do. I love the closing lines:
"If I find out, you can depend
I'll share it all with you."
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the review, and for being kind about my artwork. lol
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You are welcome
Comment from oliver818
I really liked this poem, and the drawing is brilliant! It's perfect for kids and full of
character, just like the poem. Well done of this fantastic piece.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I really liked this poem, and the drawing is brilliant! It's perfect for kids and full of
character, just like the poem. Well done of this fantastic piece.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate the lovely comments, and the stars.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"The Walrus and the Starfish", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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"The Walrus and the Starfish", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank kyou.
You're welcome.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne.
This poem about the starfish and the walrus is quite good. You used enjambment which I always believe is a well done addition to any poem. It helps the story and the meter flow.
This is a great kid's poem. There is actually some very good information and your stanzas would provoke questions in a child's mind.
Well done.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hello Yvonne.
This poem about the starfish and the walrus is quite good. You used enjambment which I always believe is a well done addition to any poem. It helps the story and the meter flow.
This is a great kid's poem. There is actually some very good information and your stanzas would provoke questions in a child's mind.
Well done.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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That's what I hoped. Thank you so much for the lovely comments, and the stars! I'm so glad you liked it.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh my!!! My smile for the evening!!! I love the whimsical, delightful, and just-plain-fun nature of this, and the picture is just too very cute!! Utterly charming!!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Oh my!!! My smile for the evening!!! I love the whimsical, delightful, and just-plain-fun nature of this, and the picture is just too very cute!! Utterly charming!!! Blessings...
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you for these wonderful compliments!
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You're welcome!!
Comment from royowen
Wow, you are artistically very versatile, but then that doesn't surprise me Yvonne, although you are primarily a free verser you can can cleverly turn your gift to form poetry so very well, I'm impressed by your manifold abilities. All this and niceness too, blessings my friend, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Wow, you are artistically very versatile, but then that doesn't surprise me Yvonne, although you are primarily a free verser you can can cleverly turn your gift to form poetry so very well, I'm impressed by your manifold abilities. All this and niceness too, blessings my friend, Roy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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What nice things to say. Thank you so much!
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My pleasure, such great reports of you Yvonne, from reliable witnesses.
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That's so nice! Thank you.
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Always a pleasure
Comment from bob cullen
Truly delightful. What a wise old counseller the Walrus is. Would it be possible for me to get an assessment?
What a great message this tells. It shows the value of friendship and having someone to talk too. I feel better after reading it.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Truly delightful. What a wise old counseller the Walrus is. Would it be possible for me to get an assessment?
What a great message this tells. It shows the value of friendship and having someone to talk too. I feel better after reading it.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Oh, I'm so glad you did. Thanks for telling me.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You asked readers not to laugh at the artwork. As one who can't draw a good stickman, I'm not laughing. This is an absolutely delightful poem--entertaining, skillfully written, conveying a point through the use of great examples.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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You asked readers not to laugh at the artwork. As one who can't draw a good stickman, I'm not laughing. This is an absolutely delightful poem--entertaining, skillfully written, conveying a point through the use of great examples.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Janice. I appreciate the lovely comments.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Yvonne- I really enjoyed this delightful poem. Perhaps I'm still a kid at heart. Curiosity is a wonderful gift to have; it leads to discovery. I once wrote a blog post about bagpipes. Who the heck thought of a bagpipe for music? What did they use initially- a pig bladder and flutes or what? In any event, I felt that this piece of work was six-worthy. The art was just an added bonus. Well done gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hello Yvonne- I really enjoyed this delightful poem. Perhaps I'm still a kid at heart. Curiosity is a wonderful gift to have; it leads to discovery. I once wrote a blog post about bagpipes. Who the heck thought of a bagpipe for music? What did they use initially- a pig bladder and flutes or what? In any event, I felt that this piece of work was six-worthy. The art was just an added bonus. Well done gal.
Tom
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Oh, how lovely! Thank you so much. You've made me feel like a million dollars. (Don't tell anyone, but inside, I'm eight years old. lol)