Autumn's Serenade
ABC poetic form43 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
I love this one, Melissa, some vivid imagery and the earthy voices changing keys and melodies is a lovely way to imagine the changing of the guard.
Wishing you great luck with the Committee with this beauty. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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I love this one, Melissa, some vivid imagery and the earthy voices changing keys and melodies is a lovely way to imagine the changing of the guard.
Wishing you great luck with the Committee with this beauty. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hi Gloria. I am thrilled by your comments and review. Thank you!!!
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful presentation and imagery of the beauty of autumn. Your words flow smoothly with well Incorporated alphabet letters. Good look in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Beautiful presentation and imagery of the beauty of autumn. Your words flow smoothly with well Incorporated alphabet letters. Good look in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hi Gypsy. Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a musical poem about the golden autumn. I like your using of the musical words like "serenade", "cantatas" and "melodies". I could almost hear it , the rustle of the leaves.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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What a musical poem about the golden autumn. I like your using of the musical words like "serenade", "cantatas" and "melodies". I could almost hear it , the rustle of the leaves.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Hi Lisa. Thank you so much for your lovely comments!
Melissa
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Melissa
Oh yes excellent ABC poem a sixer for me Great word use and rhymes and a lovely summary of Autumn well done and good luck
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hi Melissa
Oh yes excellent ABC poem a sixer for me Great word use and rhymes and a lovely summary of Autumn well done and good luck
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hi Chris. Thanks so very much! Your words encourage me and have brought a smile. So glad you liked it!!! Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Lobber
Well hello my friend,
As a music teacher, how could I not love a poem with at least eight musical terms, plus your A B C D E - all of which are notes in Western music.
Bravo!
- Lobber (Jer)
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Well hello my friend,
As a music teacher, how could I not love a poem with at least eight musical terms, plus your A B C D E - all of which are notes in Western music.
Bravo!
- Lobber (Jer)
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hi Jer! Thanks so much for your wonderful and lyrical review. I didn't know you taught music. I am delighted you enjoyed it. :)
Melissa
Comment from juliaSjames
Beautiful write Melissa. You extend the metaphor with creativity and flair. The musicality of the poem enhances the effect of your mellow words
"cantatas flow from quaking leaves"
is an unforgettable line.
I wish you the very best in the contest.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Beautiful write Melissa. You extend the metaphor with creativity and flair. The musicality of the poem enhances the effect of your mellow words
"cantatas flow from quaking leaves"
is an unforgettable line.
I wish you the very best in the contest.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hello Julia. Thank you so very much for your lovely review that lifted my spirits and brought a smile. I so appreciate you!!
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely autumn poem in ABC form! I liked your metaphor of serenades, cantatas, and melodies for the sounds of autumn. And you even create the mix of sight and sound with "dulcet tones with dusky shades."
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Lovely autumn poem in ABC form! I liked your metaphor of serenades, cantatas, and melodies for the sounds of autumn. And you even create the mix of sight and sound with "dulcet tones with dusky shades."
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hello Helen!!! Thank you for your lovely comments. I was thinking about listening to the golden leaves and how they are raspy when the wind blows. I appreciate your perspective on this verse, Helen. :)
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Gorgeous offering in ABC format. The rich descriptions take me away to a beautiful fall day. I'm lost in memories of my native Georgia in this one. Sublime! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Gorgeous offering in ABC format. The rich descriptions take me away to a beautiful fall day. I'm lost in memories of my native Georgia in this one. Sublime! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much Sally! Well, I can tell you that central Virginia has not one golden leaf yet... sure hope they are on the way soon. :). So appreciate you Sally!
Melissa
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Outstanding flow; no forcing between lines; love the rhyme; excellent imagery. I can't choose a favorite line for the beauty of each individual line blends smoothly into the following line, ending with a brilliant and soothing last line.
Awesome entry for the contest! Oh, also, quite a beautiful presentation.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Outstanding flow; no forcing between lines; love the rhyme; excellent imagery. I can't choose a favorite line for the beauty of each individual line blends smoothly into the following line, ending with a brilliant and soothing last line.
Awesome entry for the contest! Oh, also, quite a beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Oh my, Gale, you have really encouraged me with your lovely review. I am so glad you liked it!!! Thank you!!
Melissa
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I fell in love with it, Melissa. Such a beautiful ABC poem :)
You are so very welcome!
Gale
Comment from Artasylum
Hey Sugarray... I've been off the sight for a while and am having reading my poet friends... anyway, this is beautiful the picture is compelling my favorite line is... deep, earthy voices changing keys... yours, diana
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hey Sugarray... I've been off the sight for a while and am having reading my poet friends... anyway, this is beautiful the picture is compelling my favorite line is... deep, earthy voices changing keys... yours, diana
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hello Diana... thank you for your lovely comments and I am so glad you are back here enjoying this writing community. I have been on a bit of a break too. :). Thanks again!!
Melissa
