Counting Your Toes
a poem18 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, this picture is quite shocking Bill! I think you are meant to count your toes whilst they are still attached to your body! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Oh my goodness, this picture is quite shocking Bill! I think you are meant to count your toes whilst they are still attached to your body! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Doll. Now you tell me. : )
Comment from nomi338
Urk. You so nasty! Thank you very much. I just lost my lunch and it was good while it lasted. Now it is all over the floor. Clean up at my desk! Whaddya' mean I have to do my own cleaning? Yes it is my own vomit, but why do I have to clean it up, Bill is the cause. So what if he is not here, find him and make him come and clean it.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Urk. You so nasty! Thank you very much. I just lost my lunch and it was good while it lasted. Now it is all over the floor. Clean up at my desk! Whaddya' mean I have to do my own cleaning? Yes it is my own vomit, but why do I have to clean it up, Bill is the cause. So what if he is not here, find him and make him come and clean it.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Bill who?
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The guilty know who they are.
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Bill - YIKES!!! - This would definitely be the winner in a scary poetry contest. Very creative, well written and accompanied by a perfect picture. If we ever meet in person, I will my shoes on. LOL - Jerry
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Bill - YIKES!!! - This would definitely be the winner in a scary poetry contest. Very creative, well written and accompanied by a perfect picture. If we ever meet in person, I will my shoes on. LOL - Jerry
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Nice shoes, Jerry
Comment from damommy
I see that I would have to guard my toes around you. Might I suggest counting beans instead? Hey, I really got a kick out this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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I see that I would have to guard my toes around you. Might I suggest counting beans instead? Hey, I really got a kick out this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thanks, Yvonne. Nice shoes. : )
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Eeeeeek!
Comment from lancellot
Ha, that was very funny and I like the simple rhyme to it. I will say, I don't expect to see any that will be this... unique. I think this will be a hard to beat or forget.
You did a great idea with the poem, presentation and making your stand out. Well done. I will remember this one.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Ha, that was very funny and I like the simple rhyme to it. I will say, I don't expect to see any that will be this... unique. I think this will be a hard to beat or forget.
You did a great idea with the poem, presentation and making your stand out. Well done. I will remember this one.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Lance
Comment from lyenochka
Um. That picture should make this poem in the Horror category. But maybe it's from a creature who grows back his toes so we don't have to worry about someone being rendered unbalanced.
Best wishes in the contest...?
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Um. That picture should make this poem in the Horror category. But maybe it's from a creature who grows back his toes so we don't have to worry about someone being rendered unbalanced.
Best wishes in the contest...?
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you, lyenochka.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Counting Your Toes"
No rules contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Little big gross but it seems to work for you.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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"Counting Your Toes"
No rules contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Little big gross but it seems to work for you.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Doctor Ricky
Comment from Eternal Muse
That was wild (smile). Great humor, wit and imagination. Your artwork was a good match.
Good visuals and artistic presentation. That is an interesting contest, good luck with it.
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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That was wild (smile). Great humor, wit and imagination. Your artwork was a good match.
Good visuals and artistic presentation. That is an interesting contest, good luck with it.
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thanks, EM
