5 Steps Till Home
Anticipation...42 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very good job in providing three rhymes in a six-word poem. Your three items are set up in the right order. The sequence of those events is just right.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
  |
Very good job in providing three rhymes in a six-word poem. Your three items are set up in the right order. The sequence of those events is just right.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
-
Hey Paul always a pleasure... thanks for the stars. yours, diana
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A wonderful image and
good presentation, di.
-You have taken the 6
word poetry contest
to a new level.
-A good topic, formatting,
imagery, and rhyme.
-You manage to tell a
story, allowing us to picture
the inviting cottage and
all the "delights" that it offers.
-An excellent entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
|
-A wonderful image and
good presentation, di.
-You have taken the 6
word poetry contest
to a new level.
-A good topic, formatting,
imagery, and rhyme.
-You manage to tell a
story, allowing us to picture
the inviting cottage and
all the "delights" that it offers.
-An excellent entry; good luck!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
-
Pam I'm honored by your stellar review... yours, diana
-
You are welcome, and I enjoyed reviewing your poem. There was a lot you did with those few words!!
Comment from amahra
Oh my, this is six-word poetry, I think, number seven for me, and I'm not tired of seeing them. This is the first one I've read that rhymes and it's a delightful one. Great job!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
|
Oh my, this is six-word poetry, I think, number seven for me, and I'm not tired of seeing them. This is the first one I've read that rhymes and it's a delightful one. Great job!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
-
thanks so much for stopping by and reviewing... grateful. yours, diana
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Few words to conjure up a fairytale home with all the delights children love most, your words are uplifting and nurturing and I just want to live in this house all the time, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
|
Few words to conjure up a fairytale home with all the delights children love most, your words are uplifting and nurturing and I just want to live in this house all the time, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
-
Hey Dolly... thanks ever so... Diana xoxo
Comment from Mary Shifman
I like this little six word poem. Each set of two words evokes clear and inviting images. The picture does look a lot like a gingerbread house, too. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
|
I like this little six word poem. Each set of two words evokes clear and inviting images. The picture does look a lot like a gingerbread house, too. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
-
Hey Mark... thanks for your stellar review... yours, diana
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry. Your six words read well with great imagery created. I love the use of rhyme, too. The picture is a good pairing with your entry.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
|
You did a great job with your contest entry. Your six words read well with great imagery created. I love the use of rhyme, too. The picture is a good pairing with your entry.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
-
thanks janny always grateful to have you stop by... diana
Comment from kahpot
It does sound so very inviting, comfortable, and just where we want to be, very clever rhyming in so few words, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
|
It does sound so very inviting, comfortable, and just where we want to be, very clever rhyming in so few words, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
-
Hey Kahpot... always grateful to have you review. your, diana
Comment from Judy Lawless
This little cottage is the perfect picture to go with your six word poem. It does look so inviting, like a gingerbread house with a cozy fireplace. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
|
This little cottage is the perfect picture to go with your six word poem. It does look so inviting, like a gingerbread house with a cozy fireplace. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
-
Hey Judy... thanks so much for dropping by... yours, dianaxo
Comment from Senyai
Hi Diana,
This is soooo cute! Love the homey words and picture. I could almost smell the gingerbread baking as I read.
Perfect... sets the mood so well.
Good luck!
Always,
Senyai
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
|
Hi Diana,
This is soooo cute! Love the homey words and picture. I could almost smell the gingerbread baking as I read.
Perfect... sets the mood so well.
Good luck!
Always,
Senyai
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
-
Hey Kiddo... thanks so much I'm looking forward to reading and enjoying FS again... xo diana
Comment from country ranch writer
This is fantastic looks like my great grandpas home my great grandmas home always was filled with the smell of delicious ginger bread and cookies and cakes and pies,yummy!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
|
This is fantastic looks like my great grandpas home my great grandmas home always was filled with the smell of delicious ginger bread and cookies and cakes and pies,yummy!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
-
YUM!
-
🎂🍪🍰🧁🍪🍪🍪🍛
