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5 Steps Till Home

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42 total reviews 
Comment from Livia Lynch
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This is such a wonderful little poem, I adore it. I especially love the cosy feeling I got.
Amazing job with so few words. Good luck in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    hey livia... i truly appreciate your stellar review...
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
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Wow well deserved brilliant six words picture codes and sides with everything you explain thank you for sharing this was a great six word poem you're forced to be reckoned with

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    hey, hey.. thanks so much for your review. yours, diana
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'5 Steps Till Home', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you! I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    hey duchess... as always thank you... yours, diana
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 12-Oct-2021

    Hi diana, as always you're more than welcome.
    Bless you and take care,
    the Duchess
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Diana, you're so right my sweet friend...
there is no place like home...

reminds my of snowy nights cuddled on the couch...the fireplace burning...with hot chocolate and cookies...

I love your poem...and love the picture...very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Hey I.raven I always love your review and stand in gratitude for your kind words... thanks. yours, diana
reply by l.raven on 13-Oct-2021
    so good to see you...and your so very welcome...God Bless...love xxoo
Comment from pookietoo
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A very lovely photo. A very nice 6 word poem. That word alight is an interesting word. I hope you have a happy Columbus Day. That photo gives me a peaceful feeling.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    hey pookietoo... thanks sweetie for your lovely review... yours diana
reply by pookietoo on 12-Oct-2021
    Welcome.
Comment from miajaffri
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Great picture you have chosen. This house looks like a gingerbread house. Very lovely six word poem. I say lovely because your words
make me feel safe and cozy. What do you think about changing alight to
alights?

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    hey jia... thanks for your stellar review... yours, diana
reply by miajaffri on 13-Oct-2021
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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I wish I lived there. A cottage with no noisome neighbors...just grass and greenery. This is a delightful poem with beautiful artwork. Can I move in soon???

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Me too Sherry... thanks for your lovely review... yes I will inviteyou to come and play
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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5 Steps Till Home
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Interesting entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest. For such a short poem there shouldn't be any breaks so the poem flows well.

For example....

cottage fireplace invites
gingerbread man delights

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    thanks gypsy rose
Comment from zanya
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Yes a lovely, cosy, autumnal image to warm the heart succinctly portrayed in these very few words - can almost feel the ambiance created at this remove!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    isn't it just... thanks for your stellar review. yours, diana
Comment from SMASH52
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It's what you can't see (or smell) in the words that illuminates this poem. The elevation of the cottage says only wonderful things are found within.

(For what movies have you designed posters?)

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
    Hey smash... thanks so much for your stellar review... one of the Batman's many more...
reply by SMASH52 on 13-Oct-2021
    I can't wait.