Apocalypse
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Comment from lancellot
This does a good job painting a scene of a moment in time within a city. It could be London or New York. Hmm, I don't get a sense of sadness from it, more a feeling of serenity. Life going through it motions as if nothing else matters.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This does a good job painting a scene of a moment in time within a city. It could be London or New York. Hmm, I don't get a sense of sadness from it, more a feeling of serenity. Life going through it motions as if nothing else matters.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and your interesting perspective on the piece. No, sadness was what I was after, more than tranquility. But all readers have their own perspectives, and you have to live with that. estory
Comment from pookietoo
You did an excellent job with your topic in this poem. I am sorry about your dad suffering a stroke. I hope you can take good care of him. I certainly enjoyed reading this poem. I hope you continue to write great poems. Do your best to enjoy the little things.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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You did an excellent job with your topic in this poem. I am sorry about your dad suffering a stroke. I hope you can take good care of him. I certainly enjoyed reading this poem. I hope you continue to write great poems. Do your best to enjoy the little things.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and for your wonderful words of support for the piece and for my dad. estory
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Welcome.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Church bells, stained glass, Carnegie Hall ... good choices as expressions of nostalgic thoughts. I particularly loved the stanza about the violinist; great imagery.
I am so sorry to hear about your dad. I understand fully the challenges of caregiving for a family member. He is blessed to have you with him.
Take care ... love your poem.
Gale
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Church bells, stained glass, Carnegie Hall ... good choices as expressions of nostalgic thoughts. I particularly loved the stanza about the violinist; great imagery.
I am so sorry to hear about your dad. I understand fully the challenges of caregiving for a family member. He is blessed to have you with him.
Take care ... love your poem.
Gale
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and for your wonderful words of support for the piece, as well as for my dad. estory
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You are so welcome. Take care,
Comment from barbara.wilkey
First I want to say I'm sorry to hear about you dad. I will pray for him and your family. Thank you for sharing this well written poem with us, It flowed smoothly and was a joy to read.
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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First I want to say I'm sorry to hear about you dad. I will pray for him and your family. Thank you for sharing this well written poem with us, It flowed smoothly and was a joy to read.
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the wonderful words of support for the piece, as well as for my dad. estory
