Plodding.
Senryu18 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good poem
with a good topic.
-The imagery depicts
a couple who have
lost their way in their marriage.
-As you say in your notes,
many stay in the marriage
because of the children, but
I think the must pick up on things, too.
-A good job with this.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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-Nice image and
presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good poem
with a good topic.
-The imagery depicts
a couple who have
lost their way in their marriage.
-As you say in your notes,
many stay in the marriage
because of the children, but
I think the must pick up on things, too.
-A good job with this.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Cogitator
Getting through life alone is like trying to dance with one leg. Balance in life is balance of relationships. There is no independence for any life form, only individuality...John
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Getting through life alone is like trying to dance with one leg. Balance in life is balance of relationships. There is no independence for any life form, only individuality...John
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Parting with someone you loved with all your heart is agonizing. Physical or mental. Sometimes.separation is not the end of love, it creates love. Both parties have to strive hard to make the marriage work. I liked your rather sad poem. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Parting with someone you loved with all your heart is agonizing. Physical or mental. Sometimes.separation is not the end of love, it creates love. Both parties have to strive hard to make the marriage work. I liked your rather sad poem. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was very cool and witty. Great message. Alas, too many couples stay together for the sake of their children. Love, if there ever was one, romance and feelings are long gone. A sad state of affairs indeed. But this is life.
Great imagery and visuals and I love your artwork.
I liked your senryu.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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This was very cool and witty. Great message. Alas, too many couples stay together for the sake of their children. Love, if there ever was one, romance and feelings are long gone. A sad state of affairs indeed. But this is life.
Great imagery and visuals and I love your artwork.
I liked your senryu.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind words
Comment from Hitcher
I can kinda understand why they would fake it for the kids but kinda wish they wouldn't. Kids deserve the truth, as hard as it may be and people/parents deserve to be happy do they not living a lie is... living a lie: )) a thought provoking little poem friend.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I can kinda understand why they would fake it for the kids but kinda wish they wouldn't. Kids deserve the truth, as hard as it may be and people/parents deserve to be happy do they not living a lie is... living a lie: )) a thought provoking little poem friend.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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It is sad .but children can be affected by separation
Comment from Wendy G
Very apt choice of image to accompany your thoughtful words. Unfortunately this is the sad reality for many relationships. You have expressed well the emotional and physical disconnect. Best wishes for hour entry.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Very apt choice of image to accompany your thoughtful words. Unfortunately this is the sad reality for many relationships. You have expressed well the emotional and physical disconnect. Best wishes for hour entry.
Wendy
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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TThank you very much.
Comment from karenina
Nice senryu. I see these emotionally estranged couples and want to weep.
So hard to role play for the sake of the children! We get the one chance at life. "Settling" seems so fruitless!
Karenina
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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Nice senryu. I see these emotionally estranged couples and want to weep.
So hard to role play for the sake of the children! We get the one chance at life. "Settling" seems so fruitless!
Karenina
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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But it is a sacrifice they make for the children
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I habe yet to see children unaffected. The sense the tension... Normal doesn't exist. Better an honest break than a deceitful role play, on my opinion.
Karenina
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is a disconnect between these two that you have managed to hone in on and the stark truth in these words send a shiver down my spine as you nailed this one to the wall, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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There is a disconnect between these two that you have managed to hone in on and the stark truth in these words send a shiver down my spine as you nailed this one to the wall, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much once again for these lovely stars. Thank you .
