Life's Greatest Gift
Being a parent is....15 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow, this is excellent! I love what you say and how you say it! I love the rhyming and choice of rhymes! I love everything about this but I can't give a sixer I don't have to give! The flow and meter are super! And the rhyming divine!
The picture captures the essence of the spirit of the piece! Along with of course the subject of parents! Thank you so much for posting this, and I hope you win the contest!
Have a wonderful day and life since I don't know who you are!
Jesse
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Wow, this is excellent! I love what you say and how you say it! I love the rhyming and choice of rhymes! I love everything about this but I can't give a sixer I don't have to give! The flow and meter are super! And the rhyming divine!
The picture captures the essence of the spirit of the piece! Along with of course the subject of parents! Thank you so much for posting this, and I hope you win the contest!
Have a wonderful day and life since I don't know who you are!
Jesse
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review and for your kind words...they mean a lot to me. :)
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I am so glad you responded! I loved your post! Thank you so much for entering my existence!
Have a great day,
Jesse
Comment from oliver818
You describe being a parent very nicely here, bringing it to life and showing what is fun and why it's worth it. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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You describe being a parent very nicely here, bringing it to life and showing what is fun and why it's worth it. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a very well-written poem. You captured all the feelings that happen when you first see your baby. We love our kids more than words can express. And if we know how deeply we love them. Couldn't love more but then your kids turn around and give you a grandbaby. There is nothing to compare to hearing "I love you, Gamma!
Patty
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This is a very well-written poem. You captured all the feelings that happen when you first see your baby. We love our kids more than words can express. And if we know how deeply we love them. Couldn't love more but then your kids turn around and give you a grandbaby. There is nothing to compare to hearing "I love you, Gamma!
Patty
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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That's good to hear. My daughter is due to have my first grandchild in March and I'm so excited. She's expecting a little girl and I can't wait to be called grandma. Thank you so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Wendy G
Wonderful poem which resonates well. Beautifully written with smooth rhyme and metre. Positive tone. It's lovely - very best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Wonderful poem which resonates well. Beautifully written with smooth rhyme and metre. Positive tone. It's lovely - very best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate this very nice review. :)
Comment from Paul McFarland
You are lucky to have had such a wonderful family experience. And you expressed your feelings on this subject in a very nice poem. This should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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You are lucky to have had such a wonderful family experience. And you expressed your feelings on this subject in a very nice poem. This should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for this great review and your kind words.:)
Comment from pookietoo
A great poem about what a parent is. I haven't had the chance to be a parent. I enjoyed reading this poem. Enjoy life and enjoy the little things that matter most.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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A great poem about what a parent is. I haven't had the chance to be a parent. I enjoyed reading this poem. Enjoy life and enjoy the little things that matter most.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for this nice review. :)
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Comment from Mama Baer
Beautiful poem! Lovely cadence and rhyme scheme. The image you chose to illustrate your carefully chosen words adds so much to create a wonderful overall effect. We are lucky when our adult children care for us. What a blessing indeed!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Beautiful poem! Lovely cadence and rhyme scheme. The image you chose to illustrate your carefully chosen words adds so much to create a wonderful overall effect. We are lucky when our adult children care for us. What a blessing indeed!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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My children are always there for me, especially my daughters...I'm very lucky. Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from lyenochka
It is a great responsibility and as you say, it comes with the rewards of love and the joy of watching them grow into adults. I liked your conversational tone that made the rhymes feel natural. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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It is a great responsibility and as you say, it comes with the rewards of love and the joy of watching them grow into adults. I liked your conversational tone that made the rhymes feel natural. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Jill McCauslin
What a lovely poem! You really capture what it is to have a young child and then to have adult children. ( wonder how that happens so quickly, sometimes.) Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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What a lovely poem! You really capture what it is to have a young child and then to have adult children. ( wonder how that happens so quickly, sometimes.) Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, it's so nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise words here and no matter what our children do we love them as they are a product of our own upbringing and we support them no matter what, a fine well rhymed write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Wise words here and no matter what our children do we love them as they are a product of our own upbringing and we support them no matter what, a fine well rhymed write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you for such a nice review. :)
