Skewed point of view
Reflecting (Author Notes)47 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
I love this Cogitator... To me you thoughts are perfectly formed and true on top of it... I absolutely love your line "We're "pointillists" drawing drawing our live... such a vivd description... it captivated me. di
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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I love this Cogitator... To me you thoughts are perfectly formed and true on top of it... I absolutely love your line "We're "pointillists" drawing drawing our live... such a vivd description... it captivated me. di
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Many thanks for your thoughts...John
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks a skewed view about living on this earth; we are bound for living eternal life finding family in each other; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This poem speaks a skewed view about living on this earth; we are bound for living eternal life finding family in each other; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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We live in the Matrix as pixels looking at other pixels. We make holograms from energy...John
Comment from Paul McFarland
I like the rhyme, but I'm a little lost when trying to figure out what you are getting at. The last stanza I really don't get. Give me a clue as to what is going on here.
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I like the rhyme, but I'm a little lost when trying to figure out what you are getting at. The last stanza I really don't get. Give me a clue as to what is going on here.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
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We live in the Matrix as pixels looking at other pixels. We make holograms from energy...John
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Good try, John. I'll work on it.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Well, I'm a little confused as to what you are telling us. I think you're saying, there are many points of view and they can't all be right. Some are skewed. You are encouraging us to make the most of every moment and love the ones we are with. We can't go wrong doing that. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Well, I'm a little confused as to what you are telling us. I think you're saying, there are many points of view and they can't all be right. Some are skewed. You are encouraging us to make the most of every moment and love the ones we are with. We can't go wrong doing that. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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We live in the Matrix as pixels looking at other pixels. We make holograms from energy...John
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Thanks for that information.
Comment from juliaSjames
"All we behold are points of view
From one point to another
We're pointillists drawing our lives
Finding family in each other"
This final stanza is extremely well written both in content and in style. Such a clever picturesque (sic) way of making your ... point.
I remind myself a thousand times a day that all my power is in the present moment.
Thanks for sharing
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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"All we behold are points of view
From one point to another
We're pointillists drawing our lives
Finding family in each other"
This final stanza is extremely well written both in content and in style. Such a clever picturesque (sic) way of making your ... point.
I remind myself a thousand times a day that all my power is in the present moment.
Thanks for sharing
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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We live in the Matrix as pixels looking at other pixels. We make holograms from energy...John
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an interesting poem touching upon your point of view for eternal life and family. It rhymes well and does allow the reader to reflect on the points raised - existing forever, space, the realisation of family. I like the word - pointillists - and enjoyed reading this reflective piece. Thank you for sharing.
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This is an interesting poem touching upon your point of view for eternal life and family. It rhymes well and does allow the reader to reflect on the points raised - existing forever, space, the realisation of family. I like the word - pointillists - and enjoyed reading this reflective piece. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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We live in the Matrix as pixels looking at other pixels. We make holograms from energy...John
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Skewed Point of View, suggests, to me, that the past and the afterlife are both subjects of which we have zero control. the present is our "gift" and we should open it with glee daily.
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This poem, Skewed Point of View, suggests, to me, that the past and the afterlife are both subjects of which we have zero control. the present is our "gift" and we should open it with glee daily.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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We live in the Matrix as pixels looking at other pixels. We make holograms from energy...John
