Skewed point of view
Reflecting (Author Notes)47 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I read the first part of your Bio and I love your motto of 'Always be happy, never be satisfied.'
I love your philosophy and, I agree with its tenets, as much as I believe in anything, I believe we are always in the now, the moment, and there is no yesterday or tomorrow, as far as the moment is concerned. Thank you for getting me to consider and ponder my existence and life on this planet. I would give you a sixer if I had one to give.
Have a wonderful evening,
Jesse
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I read the first part of your Bio and I love your motto of 'Always be happy, never be satisfied.'
I love your philosophy and, I agree with its tenets, as much as I believe in anything, I believe we are always in the now, the moment, and there is no yesterday or tomorrow, as far as the moment is concerned. Thank you for getting me to consider and ponder my existence and life on this planet. I would give you a sixer if I had one to give.
Have a wonderful evening,
Jesse
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Many thanks...John
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You are very welcome, John.
I loved your post.
Have a good evening,
Jesse
Comment from Raul1
I think when I have read this poem this is how life is rough and glorious at some occasions. It is interesting and unique. I give it exceptional. Thank you for sharing! Good job.
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I think when I have read this poem this is how life is rough and glorious at some occasions. It is interesting and unique. I give it exceptional. Thank you for sharing! Good job.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Many thanks...John
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You're welcome!
Comment from DeboraDyess
I enjoyed the poem, Cogitator. We do, as a species, tend to have issues with living for this moment and not in our past or future, don't we.
And I also liked your author's notes, but Evil Eddie (editor) zapped you. Might want to take a look at that.
"The Big Bang of ideas"... What a cool phrase. THAT got my mind going in a dozen different directions!
Thank you for the poem and unintentional prompt.
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed the poem, Cogitator. We do, as a species, tend to have issues with living for this moment and not in our past or future, don't we.
And I also liked your author's notes, but Evil Eddie (editor) zapped you. Might want to take a look at that.
"The Big Bang of ideas"... What a cool phrase. THAT got my mind going in a dozen different directions!
Thank you for the poem and unintentional prompt.
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Many thanks...John
Comment from bhogg
I'm no poet, so certainly can't comment of form and structure. As a writer, I do appreciate words and the images that they build. From that standpoint, I found your work quite interesting and thought provoking. Bill
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I'm no poet, so certainly can't comment of form and structure. As a writer, I do appreciate words and the images that they build. From that standpoint, I found your work quite interesting and thought provoking. Bill
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Many thanks...John
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your poem. Again it causes the reader to think and that's a good thing. I am not a poet so can't really commit on your poetic form. I'd be wasting both our time.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Again it causes the reader to think and that's a good thing. I am not a poet so can't really commit on your poetic form. I'd be wasting both our time.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Many thanks...John
Comment from dragonpoet
I would think this poem give the point of view that tomorrow is our eternity and all we do today brings us to that eternity. But, I disagree that there is no yesterday. Without what we did yesterday we would have the point of view we have today.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I would think this poem give the point of view that tomorrow is our eternity and all we do today brings us to that eternity. But, I disagree that there is no yesterday. Without what we did yesterday we would have the point of view we have today.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Many thanks...John
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My pleasure, John.
Joan
Comment from Zhen Xuan Liu
This is a great poem! I enjoy the picture you selected, fits the poem well. I really liked the last stanza:
Communicate is what we do
Filling in blanks with our discourse
Soon, you are me and I am you
Eternally bound to our source
Keep up the amazing work!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This is a great poem! I enjoy the picture you selected, fits the poem well. I really liked the last stanza:
Communicate is what we do
Filling in blanks with our discourse
Soon, you are me and I am you
Eternally bound to our source
Keep up the amazing work!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I'll answer your reviews collectively, if it's OK. I thank you for your support...John
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Very interesting write and much to think about...such complex thoughts and much thinking outside the box! You have done a great job with this poem. Good work~
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Very interesting write and much to think about...such complex thoughts and much thinking outside the box! You have done a great job with this poem. Good work~
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thanks much...John
Comment from victor 66
Your poem, it's very interesting. I can't say I comprehend your author's notes, but that's OK. I am a skeptical agnostic. It's not that I don't want to believe, It's just that there is so much to believe, and I would like confirmation. Blind faith just isn't enough for me to believe that God and a cloud are waiting for me. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Your poem, it's very interesting. I can't say I comprehend your author's notes, but that's OK. I am a skeptical agnostic. It's not that I don't want to believe, It's just that there is so much to believe, and I would like confirmation. Blind faith just isn't enough for me to believe that God and a cloud are waiting for me. Best wishes.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thanks much for the review. Our mind is not our brain. Imagining a separate god is not logical . Supreme BEING is a verb, not a noun...John
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You are welcome. Thank you also for the grammar lesson. I don?t think it?ll help me much but I appreciate the effort. Best wishes.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Skewed point of view
Cogitator I like how you said ' we don't die, you are so right we all will have Eternal Life. I believe we all have a different view point about of life will be like
Gert
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Skewed point of view
Cogitator I like how you said ' we don't die, you are so right we all will have Eternal Life. I believe we all have a different view point about of life will be like
Gert
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you much...John
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Smiles John
Gert
