Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Running Blind~Chapter Twenty"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
27 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
It seems like DNA is the key that opens a multitude of locks. You can't arrest the bad guy until you know who it is. And now they know who it is so they can begin breaking out the handcuffs. There's a lot of detail in this chapter Ann from week to week it gets harder to store all the information, Especially since I'm older than every speed limit in the world except for the autobahn in Germany. HAHAHAHA
PAL Z
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Hello Sal.
It seems like DNA is the key that opens a multitude of locks. You can't arrest the bad guy until you know who it is. And now they know who it is so they can begin breaking out the handcuffs. There's a lot of detail in this chapter Ann from week to week it gets harder to store all the information, Especially since I'm older than every speed limit in the world except for the autobahn in Germany. HAHAHAHA
PAL Z
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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80 mph is not strict on the Autobahn. My youngest leased a Mercedes Coup while he was there on business and opened it up. I couldn?t believe the speed. 130 mph! So, you?re good here for awhile. Thank you for staying with me on this fast road. ;)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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When I lived in Germany over 50 years ago, my car was not allowed on the Autobahn. It didn't have enough power. HAHAHA There are minimum standards for vehicles to be there.
You're welcome.
PAL Z
Comment from Wendy G
An interesting chapter - and great to see the link with Camille Jean-Baptiste so that this part may be explained. Your writing maintains the interest, keeps the reader wanting more ... and trying usually unsuccessfully ... to guess.
Thanks for a great read.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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An interesting chapter - and great to see the link with Camille Jean-Baptiste so that this part may be explained. Your writing maintains the interest, keeps the reader wanting more ... and trying usually unsuccessfully ... to guess.
Thanks for a great read.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter, dear Wendy. Blessings abundant,
Sal XOs...
Comment from WalkerMan
This key chapter certainly will keep readers wanting to stay to see what happens next. First you remind us where Ana is currently safe. Then you show us your preparations for the Grand Jury hearing, and how you handle the reporters hoping to see you. Then you reveal what Dr. MacLavish has learned from the DNA, which links Eugene Izard to the original cold case of Camille Jean-Baptiste's long disappearance. For those of us who personally have known a woman who had been molested, we are not just reading a story, but eager to see justice done before any more harm is committed. Ending the chapter with Sanson on track guarantees the page will be turned.
As usual, the situations are realistic, the dialog is plausible, and the details keep us in each scene as though actually present.
Superb, and aptly illustrated.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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This key chapter certainly will keep readers wanting to stay to see what happens next. First you remind us where Ana is currently safe. Then you show us your preparations for the Grand Jury hearing, and how you handle the reporters hoping to see you. Then you reveal what Dr. MacLavish has learned from the DNA, which links Eugene Izard to the original cold case of Camille Jean-Baptiste's long disappearance. For those of us who personally have known a woman who had been molested, we are not just reading a story, but eager to see justice done before any more harm is committed. Ending the chapter with Sanson on track guarantees the page will be turned.
As usual, the situations are realistic, the dialog is plausible, and the details keep us in each scene as though actually present.
Superb, and aptly illustrated.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and the insightful comments, dear Mike. The shiny six star rating is such an honor. I'm glad this book has you hooked.
Sending you my best today, and blessings always,
Sal :))
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You are most welcome, Sal. This is an important chapter, and I am eager to read the next one. :)) -- Mike
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another exciting chapter, Sally. We are waiting to hear Sally's testimony and now there is new evidence that leads us back to Camille Jean-Baptiste. There is a lot to keep in mind in this story. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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This is another exciting chapter, Sally. We are waiting to hear Sally's testimony and now there is new evidence that leads us back to Camille Jean-Baptiste. There is a lot to keep in mind in this story. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, dear Judy.
Blessings always,
Sally XOs
Comment from MAMONIA
OMG! It just keeps getting better. You are truly talented and gifted, my Blind Girl.
I got lost there for a minute because I came up with two Chapters '20s and was confused. I see now that this is the correct Chapter. How you know this much is still amazing to me. Everything is so accurate in the wording and the scenes. You know how to keep one's interest, and I am enjoying the sequence of events.
Keep on writing.
My best,
Marie
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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OMG! It just keeps getting better. You are truly talented and gifted, my Blind Girl.
I got lost there for a minute because I came up with two Chapters '20s and was confused. I see now that this is the correct Chapter. How you know this much is still amazing to me. Everything is so accurate in the wording and the scenes. You know how to keep one's interest, and I am enjoying the sequence of events.
Keep on writing.
My best,
Marie
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the beautiful review and generous stars. I love this book and I?m enjoying the ride with you and so many others along. It is a real joy.
Sending you my best and love and blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Olivia Smith is sure involved in facts which she does not remember. The story is getting complicated; I can't wait until we solve the case about the pictures/art work. Or did I miss when that got solved?
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Olivia Smith is sure involved in facts which she does not remember. The story is getting complicated; I can't wait until we solve the case about the pictures/art work. Or did I miss when that got solved?
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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No, you are on track. This is a mind bender for sure. It?s how I like to write. Authentically me. :))
Sending you my best today and many thanks for the lovely review,
Sal XOs
Comment from Sankey
This was another great chapter. You are always an excellent read. Keep it all coming. Always waiting for Mondays my time to come around. One spag. "In a[n] rape kit from 1990.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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This was another great chapter. You are always an excellent read. Keep it all coming. Always waiting for Mondays my time to come around. One spag. "In a[n] rape kit from 1990.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the super kind review and generous stars, mate! It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from BethShelby
I am really enjoying how all of this is coming together. DNA really is a boon to crime fighters. It has proven so helpful solving cold case crimes and freeing people who were wrongly convicted. I enjoying the role of the dogs and the blind lady in solving these cases.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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I am really enjoying how all of this is coming together. DNA really is a boon to crime fighters. It has proven so helpful solving cold case crimes and freeing people who were wrongly convicted. I enjoying the role of the dogs and the blind lady in solving these cases.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear Beth. I?m glad you?re enjoying this book. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from royowen
It Frank Izzard is also involved in a rape case from 1990, and Miles Jean-Baptist's sister knows something from that time. The case is becoming very technical now, I must admit I'm pretty ignorant of the prices, beautifully written Sally, blessings Roy
Question? Suzy gave me one final "blotting" ?
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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It Frank Izzard is also involved in a rape case from 1990, and Miles Jean-Baptist's sister knows something from that time. The case is becoming very technical now, I must admit I'm pretty ignorant of the prices, beautifully written Sally, blessings Roy
Question? Suzy gave me one final "blotting" ?
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, Roy. This is a twisted plot but coming together chapter by chapter as we near the end.
?Blotting? refers to the lipstick Jackson just smeared when he kissed me. I forgot about all my male fans?. A girl thing, what can I say? Ask your girls what blotting the lips means. You might be surprised.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Thanks Sally
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is another fascinating chapter, complete with input from our K-9 wonder dogs! Samson is onto Izard, and the raccoon trio is onto Samson. I love your picture, for this chapter! Their little faces are adorable.
My suggestions for revisions:
... along with the person who's fashion advice I'd learn to accept.
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... along with the person whose fashion advice I'd learned to accept.
"Marie, would it be too much to send the Izard's homestead coordinates?
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"Marie, would it be too much to send the Izards' homestead coordinates?
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I don't know why, but I'm a little confused about who they're referring to when they said, "Our deceased mother's name was Millie Jean-Baptiste ..."
Why am I mixed up? I know Camille/Olivia is still alive. Agent Fred Samuels is dead, and then there were the two guys who died in the car, in the water. I think Eugene may be dead, but I'm not sure. I can't remember who else could be dead.
One of the people I'm very glad is alive, is Russ DeWoody. I'm really enjoying his company, again!
I enjoyed your video, along with Jorge, who sends his congratulations for all of your great writing.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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This is another fascinating chapter, complete with input from our K-9 wonder dogs! Samson is onto Izard, and the raccoon trio is onto Samson. I love your picture, for this chapter! Their little faces are adorable.
My suggestions for revisions:
... along with the person who's fashion advice I'd learn to accept.
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... along with the person whose fashion advice I'd learned to accept.
"Marie, would it be too much to send the Izard's homestead coordinates?
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"Marie, would it be too much to send the Izards' homestead coordinates?
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I don't know why, but I'm a little confused about who they're referring to when they said, "Our deceased mother's name was Millie Jean-Baptiste ..."
Why am I mixed up? I know Camille/Olivia is still alive. Agent Fred Samuels is dead, and then there were the two guys who died in the car, in the water. I think Eugene may be dead, but I'm not sure. I can't remember who else could be dead.
One of the people I'm very glad is alive, is Russ DeWoody. I'm really enjoying his company, again!
I enjoyed your video, along with Jorge, who sends his congratulations for all of your great writing.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thank you, dear one. I?m delighted you enjoyed this and sent the extra stars along. You kindness is overwhelming. ;))
Okay, Miles Jean-Baptiste is speaking to Detective Lembowsky about his deceased mother, Millie Jean-Baptiste. Camille is Miles? sister that had run away from Port-Au-Prince Haiti. She was a street performer and was assaulted behind one of the jazz clubs in New Orleans. In this chapter, we find out through the rape kit, she was using her mother?s name. She arrived in River Ridge pregnant and several months later married Lyle Henry, taking the name Olivia Smith Henry. We also learn in this chapter that she raped by Eugene and in that rape/assault, her memory left and has not returned fully, and her optic nerve was damaged. Olivia is now blind because of it.
The hardest part is that Olivia?s daughter, Danielle, is by Eugene, proved by the DNA. That?s why Miles is so concerned about telling her. She?s a happy and well adjusted person.
This is a full book, coming together in one chapter. I know it?s a lot. I like to write twisted plots with lots of characters. What can I say?
Sending you my best today as always, and happy anniversary to you and Jorge. Blessings always, and much love,
Sal XOs
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You're very welcome, Sally, my dear friend.
Wow, that's a lot of information, and a tangled web! Thank you for sorting it out. So Lyle and Camille's mother was never assaulted; Camille was just using her mother's name. I had forgotten about the baby! Danielle is Eugene's daughter, double-wow! I can understand why Lyle wouldn't want her to know that. I wouldn't want Eugene for a daddy, either.
It's sad that Olivia lost her vision in the same horrific crime. But she seems okay, now.
Thank you for your anniversary wishes! We still haven't properly celebrated with a dinner out, but are hoping to get there. God bless you!
Love, Mary Kay xoxo
