Where there is one.There is none
Where there is ruin there is treasure.2 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
"devourer you." - "devour you"
Passionate poem. The opening lines are intense and dramatic, drawing the reader into the writer's turmoil of pain.
It's true that we tend to suffer alone. But if we are fortunate we can become stronger from the experience.
Perhaps you could explore this theme further in future writes? You have the talent.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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"devourer you." - "devour you"
Passionate poem. The opening lines are intense and dramatic, drawing the reader into the writer's turmoil of pain.
It's true that we tend to suffer alone. But if we are fortunate we can become stronger from the experience.
Perhaps you could explore this theme further in future writes? You have the talent.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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thank you very much julia
Comment from tmoler
The content of this poem rings very dear to my heart. I believe it and live it.
I thought the way it is written could change a little. It was a little bumpy reading it. Half poem, half prose like.
It's a beautiful thought you wrote and I also believe that treasures can be found in turmoil.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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The content of this poem rings very dear to my heart. I believe it and live it.
I thought the way it is written could change a little. It was a little bumpy reading it. Half poem, half prose like.
It's a beautiful thought you wrote and I also believe that treasures can be found in turmoil.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you. I also agree with you on the bumpiness than.
