Final Result
The end of the game4 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This one line poem is good because it leaves it open for the reader to project into it what kind of game they may be playing here. It could mean that the winner who makes a lot of money gets to live in the country and breathe fresh air. I feel like a winner because I can do that.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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This one line poem is good because it leaves it open for the reader to project into it what kind of game they may be playing here. It could mean that the winner who makes a lot of money gets to live in the country and breathe fresh air. I feel like a winner because I can do that.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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I live in the country myself and I love it.
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***smile***
Comment from Ricky1024
"Final Result"
This is a 6 Word Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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"Final Result"
This is a 6 Word Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to review.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
It goes without saying that if you live you breathe. Therefore, I would change the order of these two words. Otherwise it is a wonderful poem accompanied by a great piece of artwork.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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It goes without saying that if you live you breathe. Therefore, I would change the order of these two words. Otherwise it is a wonderful poem accompanied by a great piece of artwork.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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I will consider that. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Winning is indeed a tonic and we can ride the storm on a win but it is always momentary as our luck can run out and coping with the loss is the key to surviving, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Winning is indeed a tonic and we can ride the storm on a win but it is always momentary as our luck can run out and coping with the loss is the key to surviving, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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This is very true. Thank you for taking the time to review.