I Want To Eat You
The male zombie wants to eat his wife.3 total reviews
Comment from samantha0930
Since you're going for grammar in your poem, you should have a comma after "dead" before you leave the quotation marks. Also, when I change the font and background colors, I like to make the font bold, both so that the colors show up better and also because it helps to make it easier to read.
It does clearly follow the prompt, although for me it feels more like a tiny story when you use full sentences and dialogue and stuff instead of a poem.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Since you're going for grammar in your poem, you should have a comma after "dead" before you leave the quotation marks. Also, when I change the font and background colors, I like to make the font bold, both so that the colors show up better and also because it helps to make it easier to read.
It does clearly follow the prompt, although for me it feels more like a tiny story when you use full sentences and dialogue and stuff instead of a poem.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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I don't need a comment after dead, it wouldn't let me put it in bold.
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I wish it would do better in the contest.
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Right underneath the body you can click on "use advanced editor", which lets you have more options for stuff, like bold and italics or bullet points or centering to the middle or changing the font and other things. You can also just put at the beginning and at the end, and everything in the middle will be bold.
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Oh it didn't show up right, put
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Nevermind it won't let me show the shortcut I guess :/ But you can still use the advanced editor. You want to click on the advanced setting before you start filling out any of the boxes though, because once you switch to it, it will clear out anything that you already typed.
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I said that I wish this poem would do better in the contest.
Comment from L. Kalere
I'd say that this is "Walking Dead" humor ... and not a thing wrong with it, unless you don't understand what a Zombie does. Great job...love the photo.
Linda
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I'd say that this is "Walking Dead" humor ... and not a thing wrong with it, unless you don't understand what a Zombie does. Great job...love the photo.
Linda
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, this sounds like a horror write as being eaten would be a tragic end. A scary and horrible write and no wonder you gave it a warning! He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Oh dear, this sounds like a horror write as being eaten would be a tragic end. A scary and horrible write and no wonder you gave it a warning! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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The best zombie poem I could come up with.