Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 60"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
16 total reviews
Comment from Cogitator
Good read again. Although I seldom read fiction, I do check on your work. This piece is definitely one of your best. I cannot suggest anything resembling an improvement...John
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Good read again. Although I seldom read fiction, I do check on your work. This piece is definitely one of your best. I cannot suggest anything resembling an improvement...John
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you for all your kindness. I am glad that you enjoyed this chapter. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
It was a long-awaited romantic moment, between Garth and Allie. Then you had some wonderful reunions, first between Annie and Sebastian, and then between Annie and Mary. But I'm not clear on why Annie calls Mary "Mommy," when Mary is actually her grandmother. I know Mary is caregiver to both Annie and Faith, and it has just recently been revealed that Mary is Faith's mother, but Annie still has a living mother of her own.
I'm curious about the revelation that Allie has a younger sister she's out of touch with -- Jasmine.
I didn't find any errors.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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It was a long-awaited romantic moment, between Garth and Allie. Then you had some wonderful reunions, first between Annie and Sebastian, and then between Annie and Mary. But I'm not clear on why Annie calls Mary "Mommy," when Mary is actually her grandmother. I know Mary is caregiver to both Annie and Faith, and it has just recently been revealed that Mary is Faith's mother, but Annie still has a living mother of her own.
I'm curious about the revelation that Allie has a younger sister she's out of touch with -- Jasmine.
I didn't find any errors.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Annie was yelling for Faith (her mommy) as she ran into the house. She had already been with her Nana Mary when she was rescued. They came home, and she saw Sebastian and then ran to see her mother. Jasmine is mentioned as a tie-in to Book 4...
Hugs, Carol
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Oh! She WAS actually yelling for Faith, her mommy. I'm sorry, my mistake!
If Jasmine is mentioned as a tie-in to Book 4, does that make Book 4 the next book you're going to write? I was thinking, that might be the case. Unless it's a book you've already written, and then I will be dizzy, losing track of all your books! You're very prolific, my friend. Love and blessings, Mary Kay xoxo
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No it's a continuation. This is the third book I have written with Hank and Garth (and in my opinion the best). I will start Book 4 and carry them over into it. then I want to polish the other two books and self publish them as a series. Thanks!
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You're very welcome, Carol. Best wishes, with the whole series. I do look forward to your next book!
Comment from lyenochka
Hurray for the sweet reunion between Annie and Sebastian. (I just learned from my neighbor that St. Bernards don't live long. Sigh.)
Great job with the intimate scene between Garth and Allie. I don't how how Garth can handle her. She seems to be quite fireball. But seems their love is mutual.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Hurray for the sweet reunion between Annie and Sebastian. (I just learned from my neighbor that St. Bernards don't live long. Sigh.)
Great job with the intimate scene between Garth and Allie. I don't how how Garth can handle her. She seems to be quite fireball. But seems their love is mutual.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Yes, Allie is a spitfire but she can help Garth through the troubled times when she learns more about him.
Thanks for the review. I was able to write and be by myself today and it has helped my nerves quite a bit.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
I read these episodes out of order, obviously Garth's wife has passed on, and Allie says she has enough friends to Garth's advances to her, but a new relationship has dawned between them, and Annie reunited with her best friend Sebastian, a lovely episode Carol, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : And I know I can (I) share my life again.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I read these episodes out of order, obviously Garth's wife has passed on, and Allie says she has enough friends to Garth's advances to her, but a new relationship has dawned between them, and Annie reunited with her best friend Sebastian, a lovely episode Carol, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : And I know I can (I) share my life again.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Fixed the typo - Thanks!
Glad you discovered you had skipped a chapter. I was afraid my brain and thought I wrote it, but I didn't. Thanks again for following and enjoying my story.
Hugs, Carol
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Well done, your brain?s intact, how could I doubt? Tsk tsk.
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Not to worry...I doubt it often. I see know what out but my heart does trust the Lord will find the way even if it's not what we expect. I am calmer and breathing better. Kaitlyn is in a Chicago hospital for now.
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I?m happy, we need to stand between the devil and her.
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Yes, and praying she hasn't destroyed so many lives while she tries to survive too.
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That too, if necessary
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Yeah, I just bet! hahahaha Can't live with 'em, but you sure don't want anything else! I'm happy to clean up their messes - even if it takes me all day and gives me backaches and headaches and make me grumble a wee bit. hahahahaha
Great stuff!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Carol,
Yeah, I just bet! hahahaha Can't live with 'em, but you sure don't want anything else! I'm happy to clean up their messes - even if it takes me all day and gives me backaches and headaches and make me grumble a wee bit. hahahahaha
Great stuff!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Forgive me for my delay and short response... I am drowning and am sorry it takes so long for me to thank everyone. Please know that I always appreciate you.
Hugs, CArol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Ooh, a new character enters the story. Sounds like you're setting up the next mystery for Hank and Garth, or maybe Garth and Allie. So glad Annie is home safely. Good chapter. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Ooh, a new character enters the story. Sounds like you're setting up the next mystery for Hank and Garth, or maybe Garth and Allie. So glad Annie is home safely. Good chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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And you just might be on to something there...
Thanks for reading and enjoying this chapter. The writing has certainly flowed today and lifted my spirits for the moment.
Hugs, Carol
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I'm glad your spirits are lifted a bit. Praying.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay! I read this out of order now I understand why Garth was so upset that Allie didn't tell him she was taking a trip. I thought it was just me. Hmm, well, it's still me but for a different reason.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Okay! I read this out of order now I understand why Garth was so upset that Allie didn't tell him she was taking a trip. I thought it was just me. Hmm, well, it's still me but for a different reason.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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That's okay... because I am about to thank you out of order too. LOL I am drowning, trying to catch up and thank everyone for taking their time to read and enjoy.
Always, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a really feel-good chapter, Carol. Finally Allie and Garth have time to convey what they feel for each other. And Annie is finally home with her mother and grandmother. Well written.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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This is a really feel-good chapter, Carol. Finally Allie and Garth have time to convey what they feel for each other. And Annie is finally home with her mother and grandmother. Well written.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Judy! I hope to keep these two lovebirds together because I like the "fiesty spirit" that sparks between them.
Thanks as always.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Are we heading towards a happy ending? I see a reunion for Annie, Sebastian, Faith, and Mary. Annie is safe. Garth and Allie have patched up. Looks like all is well that ends well. Cheers!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Are we heading towards a happy ending? I see a reunion for Annie, Sebastian, Faith, and Mary. Annie is safe. Garth and Allie have patched up. Looks like all is well that ends well. Cheers!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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My apologies for being so far behind on thank you for the review. I always read them right away, but the thank you part seems to get delayed. please know that I sincerely appreciate every time you take the time to read, review and enjoy whatever I write. Thank you!
Comment from Patty Palmer
A great reunion for Annie, Sebastian, Faith, and Mary. Did I miss a chapter? What happened to Katherine, Garth's wife? The last I remembered was Katherine had come to visit with him. Great job on this chapter. It's nice to see everything fall back into place.
xxoo
Patty
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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A great reunion for Annie, Sebastian, Faith, and Mary. Did I miss a chapter? What happened to Katherine, Garth's wife? The last I remembered was Katherine had come to visit with him. Great job on this chapter. It's nice to see everything fall back into place.
xxoo
Patty
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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I do believe a lot of my emotions got packed into these chapters without me even realizing it. I thank you as always for your support and kind words... Always, Carol
